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Alls Well That Ends Well

an accidental ricochet ~ on a serendipitous tangent Bite Size Poems no33 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Syllable counter PS 17 01/21/22

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2022 1:29:00 PM

Charming ~

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/12/2022 1:52:00 PM

Thank you Line, for looking back on this one, cheers David

Gary Radice

Date: 1/23/2022 10:45:00 AM

I read you, get what you are saying and understand what you said about my poem. Great work David and once again so few words with so much depth of meaning. Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/23/2022 11:36:00 AM

Thank you Gary, some break a leg and gain the love of their life others cut a little finger and die of tetanus weeks later, a tangential consequence, can it really be written in the stars, I’m guessing we don’t have choice the way we would like to believe, cheers David

Terry Flood

Date: 1/22/2022 4:48:00 PM

I guess Sherlock Holmes would want to know who was at each end of the trajectory. Smart pondering, David. Terry

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/23/2022 4:12:00 AM

Heya Terry Even Sherlock the great man himself would probably come up with the only conclusion, it’s all arbitrary my dear Watson, Cheers David

Susan Lawrence

Date: 1/22/2022 8:57:00 AM

Poignant and powerful ! Life can change in a millisecond. Happy healthy new year David. Susan :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/22/2022 10:28:00 AM

Ain’t that the truth Susan, amazing how so many have little grasp on the fickleness of life, one atom either way can make all the difference, Happy new year, cheers David

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/22/2022 5:26:00 AM

Stay well, David, no harm done one hopes. Harry

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/22/2022 6:05:00 AM

Thanks Harry, we just have to go with these fine glances, that seem to ricochet from seemingly nothing, then expand into life changing experiences, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/22/2022 4:10:00 AM

Hope it missed you David, were you out hunting? Hope your weekend goes well. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/22/2022 4:29:00 AM

Always on the hunt Tom lol, amazing how these tiny ricochets and tangents can change the whole course of one’s life for better or worse, happy weekend, cheers David