Alls Well That Ends Well

an accidental ricochet ~ on a serendipitous tangent


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01/21/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gauthier Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 1:29 PM
Charming ~
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 1:52 PM
Thank you Line, for looking back on this one, cheers David
Radice Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 10:45 AM
I read you, get what you are saying and understand what you said about my poem. Great work David and once again so few words with so much depth of meaning. Cheers - Gary
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 11:36 AM
Thank you Gary, some break a leg and gain the love of their life others cut a little finger and die of tetanus weeks later, a tangential consequence, can it really be written in the stars, I’m guessing we don’t have choice the way we would like to believe, cheers David
Flood Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 4:48 PM
I guess Sherlock Holmes would want to know who was at each end of the trajectory. Smart pondering, David. Terry
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 4:12 AM
Heya Terry Even Sherlock the great man himself would probably come up with the only conclusion, it’s all arbitrary my dear Watson, Cheers David
Lawrence Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 8:57 AM
Poignant and powerful ! Life can change in a millisecond. Happy healthy new year David. Susan :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 10:28 AM
Ain’t that the truth Susan, amazing how so many have little grasp on the fickleness of life, one atom either way can make all the difference, Happy new year, cheers David
Horsman Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 5:26 AM
Stay well, David, no harm done one hopes. Harry
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 6:05 AM
Thanks Harry, we just have to go with these fine glances, that seem to ricochet from seemingly nothing, then expand into life changing experiences, cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 4:10 AM
Hope it missed you David, were you out hunting? Hope your weekend goes well. Tom
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 4:29 AM
Always on the hunt Tom lol, amazing how these tiny ricochets and tangents can change the whole course of one’s life for better or worse, happy weekend, cheers David
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