Alliteration--Luke and Latoya

Luke Laker locks lengthy lovely letters and lollypops in a
locker lying at lonesome lounge in learning field, linking
lake Lawson to the left of Larry`s law school.Lady Latoya a 
Latina licks Luke Laker`s lollypops , looks into and reads his lovely
letters with levity.Luke Laker loses his cool,lashes and lunges
for Latoya and their lips locked in... a long lasting kiss of life,
just like licking lollypops and lemonade.
Later Luke weds Latoya legitimately in a large littoral land zone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations on a very fine well-deserved win! I wish I could get it all together so perfectly!
Chutani Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 12:28 AM
nice wedding of Luke and Latoya. Cheers for the win.Mohan
Smith Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:54 PM
Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
Roberts Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 7:27 PM
Congrats on a great write ....Seren
Johnson Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 3:44 PM
An alliteration with a happy ending. Fun write. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Lamoureux Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:36 AM
I like how you used Ls throughout. Congratulations on your win.
Mehta Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 5:30 AM
Interesting story of Luke and Latoya, Olusegun. congrats on the win
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 4:54 PM
What an awesome L LOVE tale!!! Very cleverly done.
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