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Allison and the Three Elves

ALLISON AND THE THREE ELVES Once upon a time, a talented young girl called Allison Wandered through a dense and scary forest. She passed a cottage which said on the Door, occupied by 3 elves, she often imagined That her poetic inspiration and thought pool, Came from elves that Lived in a Peter Pan world, and where Her thoughts also, were always to be found. She smelled an aroma of something delicious, Wafting her way, it tickled her fancy, a pot Was brewing on a small coal stove. Allison was almost sure she smelt lavender, wild duck, Poppies, and a sprinkle of magic dust! She popped her head through an open window, No one was home, so she opened The door and went in! She lifted the lid of the pot, and instantly Steam and cloudy forms Emerged and began forming Words and poetic phrases which Drifted towards a table and chair, where enticingly Lay a note book and pen, she was immediately inspired! The first page of the note book was wrinkled and grubby, And the second she smudged, but the third was just right, So after trying out each of the three pens, she found The most vibrantly colored one, fitted her tiny Hand perfectly, and she wrote down all her thoughts. She saw a roaring fireplace and three rugs, The third rug was the coziest As the other two looked uncomfortable, She lay down, and fell fast asleep! When the elves returned, their impish ears and eyes, Quickly became attuned to the young girls presence, And her brilliant thoughts! Someone was here, they could sense it! Allison was her name, And writing poetry was her game! Allison had written in their Note book, with one of their pens, All her wonderful ideas, and had wasted two pages of their Precious note book, and unwanted, she had thrown Them on the Floor, Behind their front door! Look said the youngest elf, someone is sleeping on my rug, Not either of yours, for mine is the coziest! They really looked naughty and slightly wicked as Allison Woke up! Terrified, she ran out of the house but did not forget To pick up the precious notebook, With her rampant ideas that she had written down, Which had floated as fluffy clouds, out of the pot Left brewing on the coal stove! She had a dream that night that angry elves were chasing Her, but she awoke to the tantalizing smell of A pot that her mom had put on to boil To make chicken soup – Allison run down the stairs and Hugged her mom, Careful mommy she said, you might find poetic words That rise in clouds within the steam from this pot! Her mother looked puzzled, But only Allison would ever know!

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Date: 3/17/2019 4:30:00 AM
Definitely up with your best. It has a will of the wisp quality about it, like an elf is playing games with my sense. Be your fault if I don't sleep tonight. Best regards in the circumstances as to what has unfolded here in NZ. Wrote a poem about tragedy and it and will be on Local community radio on Thursday. Wellington Access Radio - Hutt Zone. You should be able to get podcast. David
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/17/2019 3:19:00 PM
Thank you for a lovely comment David - i'm sure not many New Zealanders will sleep well tonight. What a horrific act by a truly demented individual. Very sad for the Muslim community and a travesty as far as New Zealand is concerned as yours and their sheltered lives face a revenge threat! I feel sad for the world we live in, as it has become so horribly violent ! Take Care David - my thoughts are with all New Zealanders of all colour, creed and nation. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Date: 3/12/2019 7:54:00 PM
G'day Jennifer … you certainly have a wonderful imagination that leads into 'fairy tale' style prose which are certainly entertaining for children to listen too - well done once again Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 3/16/2019 12:37:00 PM
Thank-you Lindsay - sorry for the delay in replying but i have fallen a little behind with my replies - Rico tells me I should write stories for children as well as one or two other poets who say the same - who knows maybe in the near future. Thank-you for a great comment Lindsay, Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Date: 3/10/2019 6:24:00 PM
Great storytelling... I liked your take on the fable..
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Date: 3/11/2019 12:24:00 AM
Thank-you - my favorite story as a child - thought the poem might like new characters but basically trying to keep the to stories somewhat alike. Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 3/10/2019 2:19:00 PM
WoW! Jennifer, You have such a fantastic imagination! You know how to tell a story my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish. I agree with Charlie, it was such a happy ending. PS. Thanks you so much for all your continued support:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/10/2019 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, I guess I'm just a story teller - maybe I should have been cowgirl who sat around the fire telling stories to all the cowboys! Wow there's a thing! Thank-you for your continued support also - it means a lot. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 3/10/2019 7:03:00 AM
Great story and a wonderful write with a happy ending. Love this, Jennifer. Have a great Sunday...Charlie
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Date: 3/10/2019 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Charles - glad you enjoyed - I also enjoy reading your poems! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 3/10/2019 5:36:00 AM
A Journey through your mind Jennifer, intriguing and wonderful, and a happy ending too. Love this...
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Date: 3/10/2019 9:57:00 AM
Hi Harry, i wanted to re-write the story somehow differently, and suddenly elves came into my mind, which then went into overdrive and the rest just burst forward! I love that you loved my poem - thank-you Harry. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 3/10/2019 12:56:00 AM
Awesome story, Jennifer, I do enjoy reading them. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/10/2019 9:49:00 AM
Thank-you Eve, just a new take on the Goldilocks and the three bears story - I think that Allison was as afraid of the elves as Goldilocks was of the bears! So happy you enjoyed my write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Date: 3/10/2019 12:12:00 AM
This was a wonderful read; Allison had quite an adventure; I'm glad the elves didn't get to her.
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Date: 3/10/2019 12:27:00 AM
Hi MLK, I always love your comments, they are always so cute and perfectly understood and commented on. Thank-you! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 3/9/2019 5:51:00 PM
A wonderful story Jennifer, and an enchanting poetic brew..
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Date: 3/9/2019 11:34:00 PM
Hi Joseph, Thank you, it was quite a brew in the elves home , but she eventually got to the security of her own home where she woke up to the aroma of a chicken soup brewing! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 3/9/2019 5:05:00 PM
An intriguing story!
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Date: 3/9/2019 11:38:00 PM
Hi Kim, A modern day revamp of Goldilocks and the three bears. Glad it entertained you. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Date: 3/8/2019 3:26:00 PM
A wonderful creative tale..your imagination shines..kudos, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/9/2019 11:42:00 PM
Hi Vijay, Thank you for an awesome comment , my imagination does run riot when I open up poetry soup on my computer. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 3/8/2019 1:34:00 PM
- Allison is a curious little girl :) - A really sweet story, dear soul sister :) - Yes, it reminds me of "Gold hair and the three bears" one fairytale my daughter loved as a child :) - I think I've read it 997 times :) - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/9/2019 11:47:00 PM
Hi dear Anne-Lise, Children do love this story, and i can imagine you retelling this story to your daughter many times- my son loved it as well - both our children are gifts from God. Poetry hugs soul sister, Jenny.
Date: 3/8/2019 1:20:00 PM
Ditto Tom Cunningham's comment. Aloha! Rico
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Date: 3/9/2019 11:54:00 PM
Thanks Rico, I know your thinking and how you have always encouraged me to write children's stories. I have highly appreciated your support from the start when i joined poetry soup. Wouldn't it be great if there really was a poetry convention - and we could all meet! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 3/8/2019 12:27:00 PM
a truly poetic take on Goldilocks and the three bears, a joy to read Jennifer, :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/10/2019 12:02:00 AM
Thank-you Allison, just a re-vamp or perhaps from another perspective - happy it brought you joy. As Rico was one of the first to support me you were actually the first comment I ever had on poetry soup, for my Blonde hairdresser poem which immediately inspired me to continue! Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/8/2019 1:37:00 PM
- It's called "Goldilocks" in English ? - In Norwegian:Gullhår :)
Date: 3/8/2019 12:04:00 PM
A lovely fantasy tale Jennifer, You should write a children's book. Tom.
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Date: 3/10/2019 12:07:00 AM
Hi Tom, Thank-you it has often crossed my mind but I am juggling poetry soup with our business and to find the time right now would be impossible. Glad you enjoyed it though, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

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