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Allegiance

Allegiance Do you know how much I love you? It is so hard for me to explain But I would like to tell you And perhaps ease this aching pain. You know I have to go There is no other way But I will always love you I promise…. until my dying day. You will have my child What could be better than that? I pray with all my heart and soul That I will get to come back. I go to serve my country At times not even sure why But like many others I say We go….. even if we die. So many of us have already gone Some have even come back Messed up in the head or injured Some gone from enemy attack. That is the price of freedom There are so many of us who care And our allegiance to God and country Is the reason we are there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/15/2014 5:26:00 PM
Congrats on a fine poem and great win!!!!
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Connie Moore
Date: 7/15/2014 8:54:00 PM
thank you so much Robert Connie
Date: 7/14/2014 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations, Connie, on your top place. Wonderful write.
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Connie Moore
Date: 7/14/2014 1:59:00 PM
Thank you again Faye I so appreciate your kind comments Connie
Date: 7/14/2014 10:24:00 AM
So true, nationalism & patriotism as concepts keep the world at war. [Just look at Russia & the Ukraine now.] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Connie Moore
Date: 7/14/2014 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Debbie so much for you nice comment, Connie
Date: 7/14/2014 8:20:00 AM
Beautiful and touching write, Connie! Love the final stanza. Congrats on your deserved win. // paul
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Connie Moore
Date: 7/14/2014 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Paul, Appreciate your comments Connie
Date: 7/13/2014 11:44:00 PM
Beautiful Connie... Congratulations on your high marks in the contest... Verlena
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Connie Moore
Date: 7/13/2014 11:51:00 PM
Thank you Verlena. I appreciate your nice words Connie
Date: 7/13/2014 11:34:00 PM
Wonderful poem full of patriotism Connie! Congrats on top win!
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Connie Moore
Date: 7/13/2014 11:39:00 PM
Dr. Upma, thank you for the nice words. I didn't know I won until you told me. Thank you!! Connie
Date: 7/13/2014 9:25:00 PM
This poem is so realistic, relating the pain of parting and the call of duty with clarity. I also love your resounding ending!
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Connie Moore
Date: 7/13/2014 9:34:00 PM
Thank you so much isiah. This happened to my daughter when her husband was called up to go to Desert Storm. your words are so appreciated. Her son is now in the service. Connie
Date: 9/30/2013 5:38:00 PM
† Only In Babylon Shall We Find Such Loyalty To The Darker Forces Whom Guide These Children *.* Yet Worry Not, For, It's Bay Leaf Tree Shall Soon Be But A Memory ˜ Love, John
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