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All That Remain--Titanic

All That Remain (Titanic)*

rebel, rabble and rubble
now lie together
in this holocostic heap
of what 
once was
my heart.
appearing dormant
wretched cries for help--
questionably audible--
arise from within.
flotsum and jetsum 
are all that remain...
as the moonless night
gives way--to piercing
streaks of amber light--
stirring the lingering
            fog...
                  in my mind.

deborah burch©
4/14/2012
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* In memory of those lost: those who died that day and those who died daily
 thereafter...
      * "Go dtuga Dia suaimhneas siorai da nanamacha"
                "May God take their Souls into Heaven"*(translation)
*this is the inscription on a special bronze plaque placed by the Irish on deck of...
S S Titanic, July18,2000. Having been built in Belfast, Ireland and circumventing the coal strike, more Irish souls were lost than any other nation that night...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/17/2012 8:26:00 AM
nice tribute - very touching :)
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/18/2012 10:04:00 AM
Thank you Susan, glad you liked it :)
Date: 4/17/2012 7:54:00 AM
Wonderful testament to a tragedy
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/18/2012 10:04:00 AM
thanks Michael... :)
Date: 4/16/2012 1:58:00 AM
Yes, may God take their souls into heaven....well written Deborah - like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/16/2012 4:10:00 AM
thank you so much Anne-Lise!! I hope you are doing well my friend!! big hugs,love deb
Date: 4/15/2012 6:58:00 PM
Do you happen to know that original language of the quote?
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/16/2012 4:08:00 AM
* Irish ;)
Date: 4/15/2012 6:56:00 PM
YOu did a really good job for the contest, just envisioning yourself as one of the many whose lives were taken that day. Love your closing quote that you put into your language as well. LUv, Andrea
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/16/2012 4:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Andy!!I didn't enter the contest...it filled up before I could enter, so I worked on this as a memorial....Big hugs, love deb
Date: 4/15/2012 3:33:00 PM
very powerful and poignant! great poem1
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Date: 4/15/2012 11:58:00 AM
a riveting piece, deborah... lovely expo of titanic moments!... :) many congrats on your wins.. am having TPS tech problems, so here is my special greetings to you!..:) huggs
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Date: 4/15/2012 11:30:00 AM
lovely tribute, my friend. many congrats on your wins
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Date: 4/15/2012 12:48:00 AM
Wow,very moving this touched me.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/15/2012 1:25:00 AM
thank you so much elliot...100years...

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