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All That I Am

"all that I am" what you see is all that I am living life in a world unknown unknown to you and the unseen such diamonds in the sky such rainbowed bubbles that float float always in a world for me I'm a butterfly of a different color a colored pearl veiling shades of pink perhaps you somehow can't see when you find the truth and life a life that belongs and stands tall you will then finally see all that I am SkyWatcher - 05-05-17 note any and all repetition is intentional this expression is for the art of poetry

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/12/2017 5:49:00 PM

Well, this is very nice :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/13/2017 4:07:00 AM

Good Morning Debbie. Thank you very much. I hope you enjoyed the entry. Have a wonderful weekend.

White Wolf

Date: 5/7/2017 8:00:00 PM

Full of such beauty and great imagery, Lisa! 'Perhaps you somehow can't see.' Reminds me of the Blackbird! Apparently, the female sees the male as an iridescent blue! Nature is quite fascinating, to say the least! I thoroughly enjoyed this entry!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/8/2017 4:33:00 AM

Good Evening White Wolf. Yes, nature is amazing I agree. I enjoyed your intake on the entry and your words White Wolf for they are like a gift and most generous. Honestly. I'm pleased you liked this little entry. Have a wonderful night.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/7/2017 12:59:00 AM

Beautiful dear Lisa. A deserving 7+ Thank you... Maria

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/7/2017 4:50:00 AM

Good Morning once again Maria. Thank you ever so much. Honestly. You made starting the morning wonderful. May we all be the butterfly. Have a wonderful morning and day. I will see you on your page.

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/6/2017 1:29:00 PM

Your words sting like a bee and your lines float like a butterfly, a woman to be reckoned with for sure. Well chosen words come alive in the reading and we cannot suppress a smile at the descriptive narration. Well written. Emile.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/6/2017 7:33:00 PM

Oh My Goodness. Hello Emile. You are fabulous. I love your intake not to mention your feedback. Thank you Thank you. Honestly. Your generosity is so appreciated. I'm pleased you liked the entry. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.

Anil Deo

Date: 5/6/2017 5:50:00 AM

Lisa, never say that about your intellect.OK? I have dined with ambassadors& premiers, worked for President Nelson Mandela's govt, so except for Mandela, U r worth hundreds of times more: heart, compassion, diplomacy & love.I like your modesty as appreciate Jan's forte in Limericks (too badwy for me as pastor).I'll join a few.Your example of a follower of Jesus shines. Your intellect & poetry have power. Some rhyme schemes you use R hard to do. I admire much & say little.ShalomGod bless U&US&USA

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/6/2017 6:12:00 AM

Morning Anil. Wow and wow again. This pertains to you and your life. Thank you so very much for all your gracious words. I am always speechless. Honestly. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. May it be a good day for one and all. Stay well. Shalom.

Anil Deo

Date: 5/5/2017 6:44:00 PM

Lisa, FIRST you deserve 10, 100, ok a million. But here's a down-payment of 7. I'll pay the balance when you build a home for the "butterfly of a different color." I'll be trying to find that variety of Monarch, swallowtail, or even Viceroy or Queen Butterflies. My preference would render thee "Red Admiral." Shabbat shalom famous poetess driving other poets crazy! Dr.Deo

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/6/2017 4:25:00 AM

Oh My Goodness. Good Morning Anil. What a way to start the morning and day. Thank you ever so much. It's my hope my work and I are deserving of your words. Anil, if there are times I don't say much on your entries its because I couldn't possibly have a smart response to match your intellect and understanding. Just know you are informed advised and have the intellectual understanding of your words and your belief. Always remain you. The Lord knows and sees.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/5/2017 3:19:00 PM

Such a beauty.deserving a favourite dear lady.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/5/2017 4:06:00 PM

Good Evening Charmaine. Wow. Thank you ever so much. Honestly. I so honored. I hope you enjoyed the entry. Never do I take your generosity lightly Charmaine. I hope this night finds you well. Enjoy the weekend and I will see you on your page.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/5/2017 12:08:00 PM

Hi Lisa, What a beautiful and lovely piece. I love butterflies because too me they symbolize "being free". The repetition in this write gave more depth to a well written piece. I really enjoyed the read. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis PS, I wrote a piece entitled "Butterfly and The Moth. When you have the time read it and let me know what you think. Reply

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/5/2017 12:39:00 PM

Hello Alexis. Thank you very much. I also love butterflies for what they stand for. Thank you for mentioning the repetition. I hope it was appropriately executed. Your generosity I do not take lightly. I'm pleased you enjoyed the entry. I just came from seeing your "Butterfly and The Moth" Be proud of that entry story and also the emotive factor. The story reaches any heart. It speaks of life and of love. I'm sorry I missed it when it was posted. Have a wonderful night and thank you again.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/5/2017 9:47:00 AM

How exquisitely expressed Lisa. The magic of life lives in the butterfly, which may not be fully seen by the eye but is felt in the heart:) Amitiés

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/5/2017 11:41:00 AM

Hi Anne-Marie. Top of the Afternoon to you. You have graced this entry with your elegance. Honestly. Thank you so much. I hope you enjoyed this little one. Also, I agree with your intake and thoughts regarding the butterfly herself. Have a wonderful afternoon and night. I will see you on your page.

Chris Green

Date: 5/5/2017 9:32:00 AM

Lisa, I know a good optometrist if they need one because if they can't see the beauty of this butterfly floating around them, then they need glasses. This poem is by far one of my favorites from you. I love how it feels to read, I love the flow of the thoughts and visions and I love the message. Such a heart touching piece that I had no problem at all seeing. :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/5/2017 11:35:00 AM

Oh Chris. I don't know what to say. Yes, I do. You are in line with Darren and are in big trouble mister. Yes you are. Allow me to simply and humbly say thank you. Words can not express. Thank you from the heart. Honestly. Have a great afternoon.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/5/2017 9:11:00 AM

I love all your different shades Lisa...you are a diamond in the sky

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/5/2017 11:32:00 AM

Hello Tim. Afternoon to you. My goodness. Thank you Thank you ever so much. I very much appreciate such generosity and graciousness. Never do I take either or you lightly. Please know you and your work are tops with me as well. Have a great afternoon. I will see you on your page.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 5/5/2017 9:03:00 AM

Wonderful, I like the positivity and warmth through out. Great write.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/5/2017 11:30:00 AM

Hello Scott. So nice to see you. I hope this day finds you well. Your review and words are most generous. Thank you so much. Honestly. Have a wonderful afternoon and I will see you on your page.

Darren White

Date: 5/5/2017 8:41:00 AM

I love the butterfly that is you, in all your magnificent colours. I like to see you flutter in the sun and land on fragrant flowers. Be full and wholly you!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/5/2017 8:51:00 AM

Good Afternoon Darren. I'm so glad I was still by the computer before I left. Words can not express my appreciation that you were able to see this entry and that you took the time to review. I consider this a gift. Yes, whole is what I am..... Have a wonderful afternoon and thank you thank you. You make my cry with such beauty. By the way you're still in big trouble mister. (lol)