All Seasons Come to an End

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Winter's breath makes the willow weep with grief
for leaving her branches bare as frigid winds blow.
She cries for her leaves demise. Life was far too brief.

It's the season when sunlight casts a deep amber glow.
Ochre leaves have fallen to the ground without a sound,
landing in rivers and streams where icy waters flow.

Withered brown, they floated in swift currents til drowned.
I pitied them as Spring through Fall elapsed too fast.
The evolution of seasonal changes is quite profound.

I too, am senescent. Years of life have I amassed,
but do not etch my epitaph on death's granite stone.
I cling to life, and my demise has not yet been forecast.

When my season finally ends, I will not moan or groan.
Winter's frosted breath will not sever me from my limb
until there's been a ripe harvest of the seeds I've sown.

When my ears fail to hear, and my vision fades to dim.
I will give thanks that my life's cup was filled to the brim.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 2/24/2024 5:15:00 PM
Loving this. You have described this part of life with eloquence. Your poetry is beautiful and reaches the heart of all of us lucky enough to be here to read it.
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Date: 2/24/2024 6:30:00 PM
Dear Duke, your charming remarks made me smile tonight, and for that... I thank you.
Date: 2/23/2024 3:22:00 AM
Deeply reflective poem Lin, peering into the abyss and retrieving the beautiful, that which sustains and gives hope. The tone of thankfulness glues the poem together. This one has obviously welled up from a quiet place...
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Date: 2/23/2024 3:34:00 AM
You read me well, Paul. It was a gloomy day and I was reflecting on the recent death of my aunt. Sometimes we only see the darkness in the abyss but fail to remember starlight. Thank you.
Date: 2/20/2024 3:54:00 PM
Lin, your seasonal portrait is rich with imagery and also with spirit! Your season will not end for a long, long time!! Happy Tuesday xxoo
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Date: 2/20/2024 5:04:00 PM
Thank you, Mike. If spirit counts for anything, I hope you're right. Tuesday was great. Let's both have an equally good Wednesday. I'm grateful for your thoughts on my poetry, as ever. xoxo
Date: 2/20/2024 2:54:00 PM
Oh Lin, this is so beautiful, a fav for me, scented with evocative words, xo
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Date: 2/20/2024 3:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vie. I'm so delighted by your comments as well as that you've faved it.
Date: 2/20/2024 12:35:00 PM
and hopefully when the cup is empty it is because we sucked it dry savoring every satiating sip
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Date: 2/20/2024 1:27:00 PM
Life has been very satiating this year, John and I'm enjoying every delightful sip. A person could get happily inebriated on what's in my cup. May our cups never run dry of life's nectar! Thank you so very much for your kind comments. ;-)
Date: 2/20/2024 11:51:00 AM
Terza Rima is one of my favorite forms and I enjoyed this one, Lin. Winter is my least favorite season and at my age, every day I pray for one more Spring. John
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Date: 2/20/2024 1:25:00 PM
I'm going to pull the "age is just a number" card, John. We have the mindset of whatever age we feel ourselves to be, so many more Springs is my wish for you... and for me. Cheers, my sweet friend. Thanks for liking this one! ;-)
Date: 2/20/2024 9:21:00 AM
Nice resemblance of season changes to the personal life. The end eventually comes on its due time, we have to sow good deeds for next generation.
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Date: 2/20/2024 9:57:00 AM
They do run a parallel course, don't they, Jay? Thanks a lot for reading me and leaving me your thoughts.
Date: 2/20/2024 8:56:00 AM
Dear Lin, Your contemplation of the seasons and their parallels to our lives touched me. The acceptance of aging and the acknowledgment of the profound changes that come with each season remind me of the beauty and inevitability of the passage of time. Your closing lines, expressing gratitude for a life lived fully and accepting what lies ahead, left me with a sense of peace and reflection. Very provocative, Lin! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/20/2024 9:56:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Daniel. We either accept the seasons we pass through or age even more by worrying about the changes our bodies befall. "Befall" being a not too funny pun. ;-) Your comments always leave me with a sense of accomplishment... provocative or not. Thanks, my new poetic friend.
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