All Seasonal Refrain

From the chimes settling morning—
Another time, another change
I slept in your clothes yesterday;
The break in brass and sleep numbing
Red blur— buried color, holding
The lasting eyes in my love's grave—
Would this dawn, you could only stay,
Instead heaps of morning glories

Summer beats down, passing morning
On from our daydreams in the night.
Your ghost on some green there walking,
In shadows and flowers besides.
Winter, approach as ice now freed—
Our love for time, distance of chimes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/31/2025 5:04:00 PM
Paige, this reads like memory wrapped in silk and frost. “I slept in your clothes yesterday” is such a soft and devastating image--grief and longing threaded through every seasonal shift. Your use of the Italian sonnet form feels effortless, even as the emotion lingers like chimes in cold air. Absolutely beautiful and quietly haunting.
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Date: 8/31/2024 6:56:00 PM
Dear Paige, lovely poetess, I am deeply moved by the melancholy mood and beauty of your poem. Such emotional and soulful imagery “Another time, another change/I slept in your clothes yesterday” - so very poignant, potent and intimate. The creative expression in this heartfelt piece is exquisite. Warmest wishes my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/30/2024 3:14:00 AM
Lovely imagery for sadness expressed! Hugs, Paige!
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Date: 8/29/2024 9:16:00 AM
So lovely, such a comfort; I lost my husband this year. Although I know he is far better off, I miss him dearly. Sometimes, I feel his presence in the familiar chair that he always used. Love that unique line "I slept in your clothes, yesterday."
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Date: 8/29/2024 5:01:00 AM
Ah the depth of this truly hits my soul so very deeply! I love especially the line “ Another time, another change I slept in your clothes yesterday;” and ofcourse you did the form very well: the metaphors and how youv played around with words to express truly is impressive. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always
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Date: 8/28/2024 7:10:00 PM
To experience all these moments again... after what you have been through this year.... hugs sweatheart! Keep moving forward, it is healing so healing to write what you are feeling! " Your ghost on some green there walking, In shadows and flowers besides." I hope I am remembered with such love. With all my support Paige! A.S.
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 9/2/2024 4:15:00 PM
I appretiate you clarifying this I truly was concerned that you were having a rough moment. All my very best A.S.
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Paige Hind
Date: 8/29/2024 3:07:00 PM
Hello, my dear friend. I lost my dad in February, but this is not about him. For personal reasons, my muse has been led to write about death... I have my reasons, but anyway, thank you, you are such a kind soul, A.S.
Date: 8/28/2024 5:53:00 PM
I love the beauty in this poem. I feel the resolution after a death.
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Date: 8/28/2024 3:55:00 PM
Very lovely, poetess. I was on a weekend trip and am so behind here. Hope I catch up. I appreciate all your comments to me
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Date: 8/28/2024 12:54:00 PM
there's something mighty poignant about this sonnet that moves me and I like that, paige...superbly done!
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Date: 8/28/2024 10:44:00 AM
You did the sonnet really well.. nice flow to it and great imagery..
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Date: 8/28/2024 8:35:00 AM
A deep poem, very deep. Mind you I prefer Winter to Summer. And an Italian sonnet to boot. Great ideas.
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Date: 8/28/2024 1:55:00 AM
something melancholic here as winter approach, beautifully- written, i discover italian sonnet, thanks poet
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