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All of Her Grandeur Into the heartbeat of the blue sea of crystal paragon Never calm, but constantly moving, ripples, hoary froth Truly mysterious in its grandeur surpass attraction Obedient to unimaginable fathoms depth Never calm, but constantly moving, ripples, hoary froth Unforeseen untamable freedom that exquisite sweetness Obedient to unimaginable fathoms depth Thirsty for the endearment of helpless sandy shores Unforeseen untamable freedom that exquisite sweetness Her heavenly breast with luscious relaxing sounds Thirsty for the endearment of helpless sandy shores Endless cool breeze scent of briny seaweed drifts off the waves Her heavenly breast with luscious relaxing sounds Blue sea merges into the rising blue heavens Endless cool breeze scent of briny seaweed drifts off the waves Under the shadow of the drifting shapeless clouds Blue sea merges into the rising blue heavens Liquescent sunset closes day with inviting twilight Under the shadow of the drifting shapeless clouds Effortlessly dissolving view completing dark blue night Liquescent sunset closes day with inviting twilight Truly mysterious in its grandeur surpass attraction Effortlessly dissolving view completing dark blue night Into the heartbeat of the blue sea of crystal paragon 2/28/2016

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Date: 10/12/2016 6:37:00 PM
Greetings, Eve! I found your poem by following the example link on your Pantoum Poem contest, which I'm very much looking forward to entering. Pantoum is a new form for me, so I was grateful for your example. However, I'm slightly confused about the rules and the example. Its very clear that the example follows the rules of refrains, however, I'm not sure I understand the rules for the rhyme scheme. the explanation on the contest page is very clear, but the example doesn't seem to follow this.
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Date: 10/10/2016 4:59:00 AM
This is fantastic. The imagery enchanting and the pic...wow! :D
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Date: 10/3/2016 11:26:00 AM
Exquisite write Eve.. Will try my best!
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Date: 10/3/2016 12:18:00 AM
Love finding your example poem here to see, Eve! I notice it rhymes two of the lines in each stanza, so I hope you don't mind if we rhyme a bit differently or not at all. I am seeing different ones being done.All very nice. Love your imagery here, dear!
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Date: 9/26/2016 4:38:00 PM
Wow Eve I can't believe I missed reading this before - a very beautiful example you have set the bar so high! I will try my best to write for you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/26/2016 1:55:00 PM
Eve, great example for your contest, hope I can write you a beauty ~
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Date: 3/16/2016 7:17:00 AM
Greetings Eve. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/14/2016 11:42:00 AM
Hi Eve, congratulations on your placement in the contest. An excellent write Eve. How well you crafted this piece, it's glory rolling down the page. This becomes a truly grandiose piece Eve. This has to be a seven and into my faves.
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Date: 3/13/2016 11:25:00 AM
I didn't think I could love the ocean anymore until now!! Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:36:00 AM
Eve, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/7/2016 11:38:00 AM
Wonderful. I really felt the totality of the ocean. Should place high. A 7 Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 3/1/2016 3:58:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..I like the blue sea..Thanks for stopping by my blog and taking time to comment..Sara
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Date: 3/1/2016 1:51:00 AM
Fantastic, Eve. A true beauty that encapsulates the mood of that photo, and with a delightfully unusual format, which I don't see all too often on the Soup. I think one of my favorite lines was "Thirsty for the endearment of helpless sandy shores" < real poetic gold right there. I wonder what makes the shore sparkle like that, in that particular area?
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Date: 3/1/2016 2:20:00 PM
Timothy, thank you so very much for the complement. I makes me wonder if it isn't fluorescent lighting to spark the froth coming into shore Hugs dear friend
Date: 2/29/2016 5:17:00 PM
This is truly a wonderful poem. I'm so glad I found it! You have such a great talent :)
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Date: 3/1/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the complement. Sincerely Eve
Date: 2/29/2016 2:18:00 PM
- This is really beautiful, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/29/2016 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise, Hugs dear friend
Date: 2/29/2016 8:29:00 AM
Your enviable talent is on display here, Eve. Simply put, Beautiful. Peace dear lady:)
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Date: 2/29/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel, for your inspirational complement :-) Hugs Eve
Date: 2/28/2016 10:22:00 PM
Eve you have created a "paragon" with your brilliant form and pen! :), jill
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Date: 2/28/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve

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