Eve Roper Poet Pantoum

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All of Her Grandeur

All of Her Grandeur


Into the heartbeat of the blue sea of crystal paragon
Never calm, but constantly moving, ripples, hoary froth
Truly mysterious in its grandeur surpass attraction
Obedient to unimaginable fathoms depth

Never calm, but constantly moving, ripples, hoary froth
Unforeseen untamable freedom     that exquisite sweetness
Obedient to unimaginable fathoms depth
Thirsty for the endearment of helpless sandy shores

Unforeseen untamable freedom     that exquisite sweetness
Her heavenly breast with luscious relaxing sounds
Thirsty for the endearment of helpless sandy shores
Endless cool breeze scent of briny seaweed drifts off the waves

Her heavenly breast with luscious relaxing sounds
Blue sea merges into the rising blue heavens
Endless cool breeze scent of briny seaweed drifts off the waves
Under the shadow of the drifting shapeless clouds

Blue sea merges into the rising blue heavens
Liquescent sunset closes day with inviting twilight
Under the shadow of the drifting shapeless clouds
Effortlessly dissolving view completing dark blue night

Liquescent sunset closes day with inviting twilight
Truly mysterious in its grandeur surpass attraction
Effortlessly dissolving view completing dark blue night
Into the heartbeat of the blue sea of crystal paragon

2/28/2016

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Jack Webster October 12, 2016 at 6:37 PM Greetings, Eve! I found your poem by following the example link on your Pantoum Poem contest, which I'm very much looking forward to entering. Pantoum is a new form for me, so I was grateful for your example. However, I'm slightly confused about the rules and the example. Its very clear that the example follows the rules of refrains, however, I'm not sure I understand the rules for the rhyme scheme. the explanation on the contest page is very clear, but the example doesn't seem to follow this.

Sunita U.D Palawon October 10, 2016 at 4:59 AM This is fantastic. The imagery enchanting and the pic...wow! :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 3, 2016 at 11:26 AM Exquisite write Eve.. Will try my best!

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2016 at 12:18 AM Love finding your example poem here to see, Eve! I notice it rhymes two of the lines in each stanza, so I hope you don't mind if we rhyme a bit differently or not at all. I am seeing different ones being done.All very nice. Love your imagery here, dear!

Jan Allison September 26, 2016 at 4:38 PM Wow Eve I can't believe I missed reading this before - a very beautiful example you have set the bar so high! I will try my best to write for you:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France September 26, 2016 at 1:55 PM Eve, great example for your contest, hope I can write you a beauty ~

Teddy Kimathi March 16, 2016 at 7:17 AM Greetings Eve. Congrats for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Vladislav Raven March 14, 2016 at 11:42 AM Hi Eve, congratulations on your placement in the contest. An excellent write Eve. How well you crafted this piece, it's glory rolling down the page. This becomes a truly grandiose piece Eve. This has to be a seven and into my faves.

Brian Davey March 13, 2016 at 11:25 AM I didn't think I could love the ocean anymore until now!! Congrats on your win

Poet Destroyer A March 13, 2016 at 10:36 AM Eve, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~

Suzanne Delaney March 7, 2016 at 11:38 AM Wonderful. I really felt the totality of the ocean. Should place high. A 7 Hugs, SuZ

Sara Kendrick March 1, 2016 at 3:58 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..I like the blue sea..Thanks for stopping by my blog and taking time to comment..Sara

Timothy Hicks March 1, 2016 at 1:51 AM Fantastic, Eve. A true beauty that encapsulates the mood of that photo, and with a delightfully unusual format, which I don't see all too often on the Soup. I think one of my favorite lines was "Thirsty for the endearment of helpless sandy shores" < real poetic gold right there. I wonder what makes the shore sparkle like that, in that particular area? Eve Roper March 1, 2016 at 2:20 PM Timothy, thank you so very much for the complement. I makes me wonder if it isn't fluorescent lighting to spark the froth coming into shore Hugs dear friend

February 29, 2016 at 5:17 PM This is truly a wonderful poem. I'm so glad I found it! You have such a great talent :) Eve Roper March 1, 2016 at 2:21 PM Thank you so very much for the complement. Sincerely Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen February 29, 2016 at 2:18 PM - This is really beautiful, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eve Roper February 29, 2016 at 6:10 PM Thank you, Anne Lise, Hugs dear friend

Daniel Turner February 29, 2016 at 8:29 AM Your enviable talent is on display here, Eve. Simply put, Beautiful. Peace dear lady:) Eve Roper February 29, 2016 at 11:27 AM Thank you, Daniel, for your inspirational complement :-) Hugs Eve

Jill Spagnola February 28, 2016 at 10:22 PM Eve you have created a "paragon" with your brilliant form and pen! :), jill Eve Roper February 28, 2016 at 10:30 PM Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve