All In Vain

moonlit tears
darkness born fears
moving at the speed of terror
hatred consumed minds
throw faces into fire
heating the misery in all who see
one more night
we'll make it til light
hopeful minds
holding tight

hate and rage
thrown to tame
the "beasts" screaming to live
another down
without a sound
silent screams heard faintly
mist of death fires of hate
burning weak bones that fall
innocence crushed and victimized
un-just souls stand tall

blood covered vows
to take beyond now
crisis remembered in hopes of no return
head counts still remain
and hatred continues to gain
again again again again
genocide reigns

hopes to remember
knowings to prevent
all lived in vain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/17/2010 6:45:00 AM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Jaci. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2010 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jaci. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 6:36:00 PM
Congrats on your poem " ALL IN VAIN " being featured this week, enjoyed the read..P.D.
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:37:00 PM
Thanks so much everyone!... uhm... how do i tell what place i got?
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:50:00 AM
Many congratulations Jaci on your win in Carol's fine contest with Dark Poetry, it's wonderful >> James
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Date: 8/5/2010 6:36:00 PM
A starkly dark pictures your words evoke. Well phrased. congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:24:00 PM
Congrats on this well deserved win, jaci
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:48:00 PM
Jaci, Congratulations on your presentation and place in Carol's great contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:32:00 PM
Congrats Jaci on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this wonderful write and win for u to enjoy today... with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jaci. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2010 3:29:00 PM
Different kind of work.Sara
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