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All In a Spring Day

first blossoms on the cherry tree . . . dawn winks pink the honey bee finds blue hyachinth . . . the peaking sun the empty garden as twilight’s sky spills violet April 18, 2021 for the Spring Haiku Chain Poetry Contest of M.L. Kiser

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/27/2021 7:27:00 PM

Nothing compares to a beautiful spill of violets Andrea, congrats on your top win, It was lovely to envision.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2021 4:47:00 PM

Dropping back with many congrats Andrea :-) hugs Jan xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/27/2021 3:51:00 PM

The beautiful hours of a spring day are captured so wonderfully by you, in vibrant living color. Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/27/2021 3:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write, Andrea!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/27/2021 2:57:00 PM

A superb Haiku cluster of 3. Such a fine gathering of spring images. Congratulations! Best wishes always, Brian

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/27/2021 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Love It. Have a blessed day............

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/26/2021 6:30:00 PM

Beautiful images, Andrea! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

John Lawless

Date: 4/26/2021 3:11:00 PM

this is one terrific trifecta Well deserved top spot Andrea, congrats

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/26/2021 11:12:00 AM

Sending you a "pink wink" of congratulations Andrea. Lovely is your garden filled with peace at twilight! Blessings!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/26/2021 11:09:00 AM

Beautiful!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/21/2021 1:22:00 AM

Great images of Spring and the promise that it brings. Best of luck in the contest. As for my absence, we had a house built. The planning for that and all the things that go with it have taken up my creative space. The worst is over; most of the sand in the yard is now covered with pavers or plants, so back to the poetry. Thanks for keeping with me.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 4/20/2021 8:57:00 PM

nicely depicted the spring day in haiku form

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 4/20/2021 2:04:00 AM

'Dawn winks pink' seems to be everyone's fav, including mine Andrea. Beautiful spring imagery in Haikus... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/19/2021 9:31:00 PM

The colors of spring enchant in this trio Andrea. Sure to be on her winning list. Blessings xxoo

Silent One

Date: 4/19/2021 4:00:00 PM

Beautiful collection of haiku...

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/19/2021 5:35:00 AM

Lovely, Andrea. I particularly love "dawn winks pink"

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/19/2021 5:27:00 AM

Excellent spring images, Andrea.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/18/2021 10:50:00 PM

As to be expected from you, Andrea: three perfect haikus.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 4/18/2021 8:31:00 PM

Dawn winks pink... Beautiful imagery... Reads like a winner...

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/18/2021 8:00:00 PM

Now you've done it. Incredible haiku, fabulous colors, and scents, Andrea, I prefer the glance of the morning. Good luck in the contest

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/18/2021 7:17:00 PM

Three very fine haiku for a spring haiku contest. Nice work. BW on your entry.

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/18/2021 5:24:00 PM

Three nicely written links in a spring haiku chain. I have sent you soupmail.

Mike Bayles

Date: 4/18/2021 5:14:00 PM

Andrea. This is stunning and beautiful.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/18/2021 4:00:00 PM

Beautiful palette of colors and senses, Andrea. I think I like the winking dawn most of all (as if the sun knows something we don't). That or it's just barely tipping over the horizon and I'm reading to much into it ... lol.

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/18/2021 3:50:00 PM

Your spoiling us Andrea with a fabulous triptych haiku, and you thread a dawn to dusk theme throughout, colorful imagery bursting out in each section, big contender, a haiku chain indeed best of luck in the contest, cheers David