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All In a Spring Day

first blossoms
on the cherry tree . . .
dawn winks pink

the honey bee
finds blue hyachinth . . .
the peaking sun

the empty garden
as twilight’s sky
spills violet

April 18, 2021
for the Spring Haiku Chain Poetry Contest of M.L. Kiser

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Mystic Rose Rose Date: 4/27/2021 7:27:00 PM Nothing compares to a beautiful spill of violets Andrea, congrats on your top win, It was lovely to envision. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/27/2021 4:47:00 PM Dropping back with many congrats Andrea :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 4/27/2021 3:51:00 PM The beautiful hours of a spring day are captured so wonderfully by you, in vibrant living color. Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Evelyn Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/27/2021 3:48:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write, Andrea! Login to Reply

Brian Sambourne Date: 4/27/2021 2:57:00 PM A superb Haiku cluster of 3. Such a fine gathering of spring images. Congratulations! Best wishes always, Brian Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/27/2021 10:45:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Love It. Have a blessed day............ Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 4/26/2021 6:30:00 PM Beautiful images, Andrea! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 4/26/2021 3:11:00 PM this is one terrific trifecta Well deserved top spot Andrea, congrats Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 4/26/2021 11:12:00 AM Sending you a "pink wink" of congratulations Andrea. Lovely is your garden filled with peace at twilight! Blessings! Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 4/26/2021 11:09:00 AM Beautiful! Login to Reply

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 4/21/2021 1:22:00 AM Great images of Spring and the promise that it brings. Best of luck in the contest. As for my absence, we had a house built. The planning for that and all the things that go with it have taken up my creative space. The worst is over; most of the sand in the yard is now covered with pavers or plants, so back to the poetry. Thanks for keeping with me. Login to Reply

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 4/20/2021 8:57:00 PM nicely depicted the spring day in haiku form Login to Reply

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 4/20/2021 2:04:00 AM 'Dawn winks pink' seems to be everyone's fav, including mine Andrea. Beautiful spring imagery in Haikus... Hugs.. ~ Ani Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/19/2021 9:31:00 PM The colors of spring enchant in this trio Andrea. Sure to be on her winning list. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 4/19/2021 4:00:00 PM Beautiful collection of haiku... Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 4/19/2021 5:35:00 AM Lovely, Andrea. I particularly love "dawn winks pink" Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/19/2021 5:27:00 AM Excellent spring images, Andrea. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/18/2021 10:50:00 PM As to be expected from you, Andrea: three perfect haikus. Login to Reply

Supraja Kannan Date: 4/18/2021 8:31:00 PM Dawn winks pink... Beautiful imagery... Reads like a winner... Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 4/18/2021 8:00:00 PM Now you've done it. Incredible haiku, fabulous colors, and scents, Andrea, I prefer the glance of the morning. Good luck in the contest Login to Reply

L Milton Hankins Date: 4/18/2021 7:17:00 PM Three very fine haiku for a spring haiku contest. Nice work. BW on your entry. Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 4/18/2021 5:24:00 PM Three nicely written links in a spring haiku chain. I have sent you soupmail. Login to Reply

Mike Bayles Date: 4/18/2021 5:14:00 PM Andrea. This is stunning and beautiful. Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 4/18/2021 4:00:00 PM Beautiful palette of colors and senses, Andrea. I think I like the winking dawn most of all (as if the sun knows something we don't). That or it's just barely tipping over the horizon and I'm reading to much into it ... lol. Login to Reply

David Kavanagh Date: 4/18/2021 3:50:00 PM Your spoiling us Andrea with a fabulous triptych haiku, and you thread a dawn to dusk theme throughout, colorful imagery bursting out in each section, big contender, a haiku chain indeed best of luck in the contest, cheers David Login to Reply

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