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All in a Spring Day

first blossoms on the cherry tree . . . dawn winks pink the honey bee finds blue hyachinth . . . the peaking sun the empty garden as twilight’s sky spills violet April 18, 2021 for the Spring Haiku Chain Poetry Contest of M.L. Kiser

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Date: 4/27/2021 7:27:00 PM
Nothing compares to a beautiful spill of violets Andrea, congrats on your top win, It was lovely to envision.
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Date: 4/27/2021 4:47:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats Andrea :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2021 3:51:00 PM
The beautiful hours of a spring day are captured so wonderfully by you, in vibrant living color. Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Evelyn
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Date: 4/27/2021 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful write, Andrea!
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Date: 4/27/2021 2:57:00 PM
A superb Haiku cluster of 3. Such a fine gathering of spring images. Congratulations! Best wishes always, Brian
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Date: 4/27/2021 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Love It. Have a blessed day............
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Date: 4/27/2021 8:54:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Andrea. Congratulations on your top win!!
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Date: 4/26/2021 6:30:00 PM
Beautiful images, Andrea! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/26/2021 3:11:00 PM
this is one terrific trifecta Well deserved top spot Andrea, congrats
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Date: 4/26/2021 11:12:00 AM
Sending you a "pink wink" of congratulations Andrea. Lovely is your garden filled with peace at twilight! Blessings!
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Date: 4/26/2021 11:09:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 4/21/2021 1:22:00 AM
Great images of Spring and the promise that it brings. Best of luck in the contest. As for my absence, we had a house built. The planning for that and all the things that go with it have taken up my creative space. The worst is over; most of the sand in the yard is now covered with pavers or plants, so back to the poetry. Thanks for keeping with me.
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Date: 4/20/2021 8:57:00 PM
nicely depicted the spring day in haiku form
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Date: 4/20/2021 2:04:00 AM
'Dawn winks pink' seems to be everyone's fav, including mine Andrea. Beautiful spring imagery in Haikus... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 4/19/2021 9:31:00 PM
The colors of spring enchant in this trio Andrea. Sure to be on her winning list. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/19/2021 4:00:00 PM
Beautiful collection of haiku...
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Date: 4/19/2021 5:35:00 AM
Lovely, Andrea. I particularly love "dawn winks pink"
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Date: 4/19/2021 5:27:00 AM
Excellent spring images, Andrea.
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Date: 4/18/2021 10:50:00 PM
As to be expected from you, Andrea: three perfect haikus.
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Date: 4/18/2021 8:31:00 PM
Dawn winks pink... Beautiful imagery... Reads like a winner...
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Date: 4/18/2021 8:00:00 PM
Now you've done it. Incredible haiku, fabulous colors, and scents, Andrea, I prefer the glance of the morning. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/18/2021 7:17:00 PM
Three very fine haiku for a spring haiku contest. Nice work. BW on your entry.
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Date: 4/18/2021 5:24:00 PM
Three nicely written links in a spring haiku chain. I have sent you soupmail.
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Date: 4/18/2021 5:14:00 PM
Andrea. This is stunning and beautiful.
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Date: 4/18/2021 4:00:00 PM
Beautiful palette of colors and senses, Andrea. I think I like the winking dawn most of all (as if the sun knows something we don't). That or it's just barely tipping over the horizon and I'm reading to much into it ... lol.
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