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©All In - Artimus The Poet, Susan Manley 6-5-2025 All RIghts Reserved

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All in shape shifter within nothing firm no direct plans in motion just live can't plan don't know where I stand following the wave don't feel really safe is this growth? over the top you came in romantic gestures convincing but in real life you want me one way and I feel it's that way or the highway except you came to me ohh ohhh ohhhh ohhh ohhhh ohhhh chased me down followed me everywhere and when you finally had me then you need to mold me like I should fit a type and not just be bold me exhausted depressed every day you sleep in and I get up and take on life stressed I pay the bills I have the house I make the food keep the plans But you are like a boy and less like a man Not making this work because it does not fit your internal idea of what you want but in real life you want me one way and I feel it's that way or the highway except you came to me No commitment no big plans drifting along are you waiting for me to take command? I was calling for a partnership not this sort of dynamic I guess we both did not get what we wanted is it better than before? You have to tell me.. You have to tell me.. or set us both free

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Date: 6/30/2025 4:04:00 PM
Emotionally packed AI creation (with your lyrics, of course)
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Susan Manley
Date: 6/30/2025 8:35:00 PM
AI with heavy prompting ( programming from me) at every turn to get the sound and the interludes, solos etc.

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