White Wolf Poet Sonnet

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All I Need To Know:

As thy shadows cast gloom over my eyes,
I feel my heart pounding faster inside,
Telling myself I can't live by these lies,
Wondering if times shall change this low tide.

Searching for an answer, I lay and wait,
Aware only of thy pain that remains,
Leaving my heart and soul to their own fate,
I turn to you for comfort ‘til this wanes.

For in your eyes, I lose myself it seems,
Needing only your time and your sweet smile,
When I'm with you, it's beyond any dreams,
Please tell me you will stay just for a while.

Together we'll find the answers we're due,
All I need to know is that I have you.

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Anna M Shepard April 25, 2018 at 4:03 PM Having that special person in your life, truly means you're rich. Love it!

Dean Wood June 13, 2017 at 6:06 PM I actually recognized this as a sonnet! So very well done! Congratulations! White Wolf June 13, 2017 at 6:10 PM Yes, I adore the sonnet form, just wish I could do it justice! Thanks, Dean /|\

Robert Lindley June 8, 2017 at 6:57 AM Top level sonnet my friend. A7 and a new fav... White Wolf June 8, 2017 at 6:59 AM Thank you, Robert /|\

Just James June 3, 2017 at 11:54 PM Yes, someone's time and smile...that can be enough. Great write!

Lenna Walker June 2, 2017 at 11:26 AM Great write Rick !! Many times, it is so true for making it through the tough times in life, to KNOW you have that 'one' to see you through...

Talin Kalishian June 1, 2017 at 4:36 AM Rick its amazing ,, i loved the way i read it and the way it touched my heart :)) thankx White Wolf June 1, 2017 at 5:05 AM You are welcome, Talin! Nice to see you again /|\

Lisa Ricci June 1, 2017 at 3:45 AM White Wolf White Wolf. Good Day to you. You have captured this reader. Allow me to simply say this entry is beautiful. All is right within the entry in its entirety. What can be said for love. Everything. Thank you for sharing your talent. Have a wonderful night (perhaps) Well done and executed in its entirety. Honestly White Wolf June 1, 2017 at 3:50 AM Haha, yes, it is night time over here in Oz! Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Lisa /|\

Alexis Y. May 31, 2017 at 6:50 PM WoW! Rick, This is a beautiful and well written Sonnet. We all long for that special someone to be there for us. I hope that "everyone" finds that "person" that you wrote about. This would have been a without a doubt seven:-) Alexis PS, Did I tell you that you do amazing with the Sonnet form? If not you amazing! White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 7:11 PM It was so nice to hear your wonderful compliment this morning, Alexis! You are far too generous! Thanks /|\

John Hamilton May 31, 2017 at 12:40 PM What a beautiful sonnet, WW, sad but a kind of temporary comfort at least. White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 5:37 PM Thank you for reading me today, John /|\

Dean Wood May 31, 2017 at 11:34 AM Now this is really pretty Wolf. You might consider saving that last line to your quotes. That good stuff! I don't have the option to give number ratings anymore for some reason but this is a 7. White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 5:36 PM Haha, I know what you mean! No more rating!!! Thanks again, Dean /|\

Richard Lamoureux May 31, 2017 at 8:28 AM Beautiful my friend! White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 8:31 AM I'm so glad you liked this one, Richard! Enjoy your day mate /|\

Akkina Downing May 31, 2017 at 8:24 AM Sing it out loud maybe she just hasn't heard it loud enough to sing back :) A beautiful write Whit Wolf. I enjoyed it a lot :) hugs White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 8:28 AM I can't sing to save my life! Haha! Thank you for enjoying /|\

Chuck Melugin May 31, 2017 at 8:15 AM Wolf, you have your faithful guitar, your mighty muse, and a heart that can make any woman mesmerized as you look into her eyes and whisper.....All I Need To Know...... 7 ps...I luv the pic....My best to you, chuck White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 8:23 AM Haha, Thanks, Chuck! In my younger day, I did enjoy chasing the skirts around a lot I must admit! Good to see you again my friend /|\

Chris Green May 31, 2017 at 7:33 AM This was beautiful my friend. Having someone special to lean on, to share your sorrows with, always makes things seem so much better. Just a calming voice can make our problems disappear. White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 7:45 AM Haha, I rarely venture out into the REAL world so my chances of meeting someone are rather slim! Not that I'm complaining! I have my faithful guitar shaped like a woman! Thanks, Chris! /|\

Vladislav Raven May 31, 2017 at 7:03 AM Hi White Wolf, an excellent sonnet you write and place before us. The words pull one into the heart of the subject. Love and the sonnet dance well together especially in the hands of a most competent poet. Your words paint a canvas of love's reflection. I am learning by looking at the construction of the sonnets of others. May your pen ever run gold. An excellent sonnet. Your Friend always....Mike. White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 7:07 AM Thank you for your encouraging words, Mike! I really do appreciate it mate! Cheers! /|\