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As thy shadows cast gloom over my eyes, I feel my heart pounding faster inside, Telling myself I can't live by these lies, Wondering if times shall change this low tide. Searching for an answer, I lay and wait, Aware only of thy pain that remains, Leaving my heart and soul to their own fate, I turn to you for comfort ‘til this wanes. For in your eyes, I lose myself it seems, Needing only your time and your sweet smile, When I'm with you, it's beyond any dreams, Please tell me you will stay just for a while. Together we'll find the answers we're due, All I need to know is that I have you.

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Anna M Shepard

Date: 4/25/2018 4:03:00 PM

Having that special person in your life, truly means you're rich. Love it!

Dean Wood

Date: 6/13/2017 6:06:00 PM

I actually recognized this as a sonnet! So very well done! Congratulations!

White Wolf
Date: 6/13/2017 6:10:00 PM

Yes, I adore the sonnet form, just wish I could do it justice! Thanks, Dean /|\

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/8/2017 6:57:00 AM

Top level sonnet my friend. A7 and a new fav...

White Wolf
Date: 6/8/2017 6:59:00 AM

Thank you, Robert /|\

Just James

Date: 6/3/2017 11:54:00 PM

Yes, someone's time and smile...that can be enough. Great write!

Lenna Walker

Date: 6/2/2017 11:26:00 AM

Great write Rick !! Many times, it is so true for making it through the tough times in life, to KNOW you have that 'one' to see you through...

Talin Kalishian

Date: 6/1/2017 4:36:00 AM

Rick its amazing ,, i loved the way i read it and the way it touched my heart :)) thankx

White Wolf
Date: 6/1/2017 5:05:00 AM

You are welcome, Talin! Nice to see you again /|\

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/1/2017 3:45:00 AM

White Wolf White Wolf. Good Day to you. You have captured this reader. Allow me to simply say this entry is beautiful. All is right within the entry in its entirety. What can be said for love. Everything. Thank you for sharing your talent. Have a wonderful night (perhaps) Well done and executed in its entirety. Honestly

White Wolf
Date: 6/1/2017 3:50:00 AM

Haha, yes, it is night time over here in Oz! Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Lisa /|\

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/31/2017 6:50:00 PM

WoW! Rick, This is a beautiful and well written Sonnet. We all long for that special someone to be there for us. I hope that "everyone" finds that "person" that you wrote about. This would have been a without a doubt seven:-) Alexis PS, Did I tell you that you do amazing with the Sonnet form? If not you amazing!

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 7:11:00 PM

It was so nice to hear your wonderful compliment this morning, Alexis! You are far too generous! Thanks /|\

John Hamilton

Date: 5/31/2017 12:40:00 PM

What a beautiful sonnet, WW, sad but a kind of temporary comfort at least.

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 5:37:00 PM

Thank you for reading me today, John /|\

Dean Wood

Date: 5/31/2017 11:34:00 AM

Now this is really pretty Wolf. You might consider saving that last line to your quotes. That good stuff! I don't have the option to give number ratings anymore for some reason but this is a 7.

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 5:36:00 PM

Haha, I know what you mean! No more rating!!! Thanks again, Dean /|\

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/31/2017 8:28:00 AM

Beautiful my friend!

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 8:31:00 AM

I'm so glad you liked this one, Richard! Enjoy your day mate /|\

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/31/2017 8:24:00 AM

Sing it out loud maybe she just hasn't heard it loud enough to sing back :) A beautiful write Whit Wolf. I enjoyed it a lot :) hugs

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 8:28:00 AM

I can't sing to save my life! Haha! Thank you for enjoying /|\

Chuck Melugin

Date: 5/31/2017 8:15:00 AM

Wolf, you have your faithful guitar, your mighty muse, and a heart that can make any woman mesmerized as you look into her eyes and whisper.....All I Need To Know...... 7 ps...I luv the pic....My best to you, chuck

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 8:23:00 AM

Haha, Thanks, Chuck! In my younger day, I did enjoy chasing the skirts around a lot I must admit! Good to see you again my friend /|\

Chris Green

Date: 5/31/2017 7:33:00 AM

This was beautiful my friend. Having someone special to lean on, to share your sorrows with, always makes things seem so much better. Just a calming voice can make our problems disappear.

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 7:45:00 AM

Haha, I rarely venture out into the REAL world so my chances of meeting someone are rather slim! Not that I'm complaining! I have my faithful guitar shaped like a woman! Thanks, Chris! /|\

Vladislav Raven

Date: 5/31/2017 7:03:00 AM

Hi White Wolf, an excellent sonnet you write and place before us. The words pull one into the heart of the subject. Love and the sonnet dance well together especially in the hands of a most competent poet. Your words paint a canvas of love's reflection. I am learning by looking at the construction of the sonnets of others. May your pen ever run gold. An excellent sonnet. Your Friend always....Mike.

White Wolf
Date: 5/31/2017 7:07:00 AM

Thank you for your encouraging words, Mike! I really do appreciate it mate! Cheers! /|\