All Day I Waited

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All day I waited, for a severe rain storm to start; the sun disappeared and dark gray clouds swirled, and the birds became quiet. It began with a wind blowing my plants and flowers, I really did fear for their safety and was worried; then, the rain came in a torrent, it lasted a moment- then, the sun came out again ! _______________________ July 2, 2020 Poetry/Light Verse/All Day I Waited Copyright Protected, ID 20-1265-664-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/2/2020 10:24:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Constance. I don't mind a quick storm to cool off the hot, summer days, especially when the sun comes back and a rainbow appears. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2020 12:47:00 PM

Rhonda, thanks for visiting, we have been having strange weather here in Ontario Canada, really hot day where it just starts to rain torrents, then the sun comes back out blazing, lots of thunder storms and wild winds, give me some snowflakes, please _Constance

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/2/2020 6:19:00 PM

Nice one...You kept it in the moment...with heartbeat

Constance La France
Date: 7/2/2020 6:21:00 PM

Arturo, thanks for the visit, that was what I was aiming for so happy I succeeded, appreciate your comment _Constance