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All Around

In the night what a dulcet delight where we lay after the love we made! Whooshing wind fluttered whispering leaves in the glade. Nature’s creatures of night crooned a sweet serenade. Where a stream murmured past us, we found a melodious sound all around! Written 8/24/12 by Andrea Dietrich Inspired by nette onclaud’s NIGHT MELODY - - - TROIS - par - HUIT poetry contest

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Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 11/23/2013 9:12:00 AM

Hmmmm, nice and steamy and just a little naughty. I love it when a poet can describe an otherwise "vulgar-ish" or explicit subject in an eloquent, ambiguous yet understood way. Not an easy thing to do; great job, Andrea :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2012 6:15:00 AM

I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Andrea. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2012 10:04:00 PM

thankxx for your sweet comments and kind words Andrea .. so happy they r home with us now .. do u know where Nikko has gone?

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/5/2012 6:34:00 PM

Another nice imaginative poem on night sounds. love phyl

Tanya Harrington

Date: 9/4/2012 12:49:00 PM

Another beautiful write Andrea! Congrats. :) Tanya

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 11:02:00 AM

Andrea, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's NIGHT MELODY---TROIS-par-par par-what a HUIT :-) :-) contest... I love your entry... always~ PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Night Melody" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Erich Goller

Date: 8/28/2012 9:09:00 PM

Congratulation on your win, a beautiful and romantic poem. I enjoyed reading it 'God bless you,Erich.

Kash Poet

Date: 8/28/2012 2:10:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea!Loved this!

Jack Horne

Date: 8/28/2012 12:41:00 PM

what a lovely romantic write, my friend

Dan Kearley

Date: 8/28/2012 9:46:00 AM

Whew!!! Heat of the moment! Very nice.. :o)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/28/2012 9:21:00 AM

Love the sounds of s stream murmuring. Congratulations.

Joseph May

Date: 8/28/2012 8:16:00 AM

very nice Andrea....congrats on your win

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/28/2012 6:37:00 AM

love the spin and tonality of this one, andie.. big applause to you for your fab win in my contest!..:) huggs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/28/2012 6:15:00 AM

Romance blossoms once again and so do congratulations xx

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/28/2012 6:02:00 AM

Nice poem, sounds like a nice retreat. Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/26/2012 9:42:00 PM

A romantic delight with imagery that comes alive in colors and sounds. Lovely entry Andrea.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/26/2012 9:13:00 PM

so lovely, Andrea! i love it! Good luck in the contest! hugs, leonora

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/26/2012 7:14:00 PM

Very, very good. I like it. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/26/2012 3:34:00 PM

I love this one andrea, very atmospheric and with a hint of eroticism, right up my street! thanks for commenting on 'telepathic', those 5 w's are tricky; I think the only ones of mine you haven't seen are 'still life' and 'bottle baby' (early posts) yes, I was referring to your constanza, didn't realize you'd only posted it on your blog, but I liked it a lot anyway :-)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/26/2012 3:27:00 PM

OMW...you and Joe are gonna get poison ivy BIG TIME!! Nice surround sound for your date...enjoyed! gwendolen ps...I began an entry for the txting contest of David's...Look for it tomorrow evening...u put some fire in my britches, girlie! hahah gwendoeln