Alignment

I don’t want to go, from the home I love So, I keep on praying to above There must be a way that works for me There must be a path to opportunity I found myself upon this hill, looking at the sky When my soul took off, to creatively fly I found myself in a safe place Where there was so much I could erase Now, it rolls over me like thunder with the rain As I become lost in this ongoing pain Now, I have so many questions, whirling around There are no answers and I am left without a sound Sometimes things in life, don’t make sense at all There’s a fog to be seen after the fall Sometimes things come into place, that are meant to be So, I wait for the alignment to set upon me Heidi Sands 6/2/19

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/8/2019 2:42:00 AM

Alignment will come and people do adapt easier to change than we think possible. A write from the heart - you have your memories my friend, Hugs, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/8/2019 6:43:00 AM

Thanks so much Jennifer. Have a nice day :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/7/2019 1:49:00 AM

I hope what comes next is amazingly wonderful for you! "Sometimes things in life, don’t make sense at all There’s a fog to be seen after the fall" wow!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/7/2019 6:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Caren. I appreciate your kind comment and suppport :]

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/6/2019 6:12:00 AM

Heartfelt my friend...may your alignment be perfect...have a great day Heidi...^WW^...{*J*}

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/6/2019 7:49:00 AM

Thank you very much WW. I hope you have a nice day :)

Gary Smith

Date: 6/5/2019 6:15:00 PM

Deep and meaningful poetry Heidi, :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/5/2019 6:18:00 PM

Thank you Gary :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/3/2019 7:23:00 PM

A stirring poem that asks provocative questions, Heidi. God says that everyone or thing has a purpose and yours was to write this poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/4/2019 5:48:00 AM

That is so nice of you to say. Thank you very much Ralph :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/3/2019 5:03:00 PM

such a stirring write on one's journey, heidi... well done!...huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/3/2019 5:30:00 PM

Thank you Nette :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/3/2019 8:30:00 AM

- I feel your thought, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/3/2019 8:56:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and comment. I appreciate it. Have a nice day :)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 6/2/2019 11:38:00 PM

Oh dear Heidi your poem has really stirred emotions deep inside me. Such a heartrending write, so deep and emotive, I truly wish you well dear Heidi. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/3/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you very much Ann. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/2/2019 4:45:00 PM

Very meaningful thoughts Heidi...though uniquely you, they relate to many. One verse says it all: Sometimes things in life, don’t make sense at all. But as you say: Sometimes things come into place, that are meant to be. Very wise and deep.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/2/2019 4:53:00 PM

Hi Vijay. Thank you very much for your kind comment. It has been so difficult lately, but eventually things fall into place. Have a nice evening :)

Silent One

Date: 6/2/2019 4:03:00 PM

You sum it up perfectly in the lasts stanza.. so happy to see you posting... Very deep thoughts in your poem..

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/2/2019 4:16:00 PM

Thank you twice. You helped me with your previous comment and led me to write this when I had time and have left such kind feedback here! I appreciate it very much :)