Aliens

The alien saucer fell hard.
It landed right there in my yard.
    I'd give them jobs mowing
    or cooking and sewing
but none of them has a Green Card.

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John Lawless

June 13, 2017 at 10:02 PM

AH, a little bit of truth hidden within the jest.....wonderful....

J-Mag Guthrie

June 14, 2017 at 4:01 AM

lol -- I'm in Texas, US .... 'nuff said. Thank you!

Darren White

June 13, 2017 at 1:18 PM

LOL J-Mag, you won!!! Congrats :) Now choose: either become a limerick writer, or go back to..... ;)

J-Mag Guthrie

June 13, 2017 at 1:25 PM

I wrote a weather app, too. Maybe I should write more apps.... ???

Paul Callus

June 12, 2017 at 3:47 PM

You are not alien to Limericks, J-Mag...this top winner is prove of that:) Congratulations! // paul

J-Mag Guthrie

June 13, 2017 at 1:24 PM

thank you so much

Barry Stebbings

June 12, 2017 at 10:53 AM

Ha, ha, nicely done. Congratulations on your top place. // Barry

J-Mag Guthrie

June 13, 2017 at 1:23 PM

thank you .... I am overwhelmed by so many kind comments

Larry Bradfield

June 11, 2017 at 10:43 PM

Congratulations! I love it......Larry

J-Mag Guthrie

June 12, 2017 at 7:05 AM

:) Thank you.

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

June 11, 2017 at 8:04 PM

I loved this because it was funny and silly. Exactly what a limerick should be!

J-Mag Guthrie

June 11, 2017 at 8:18 PM

Thank you so much, I like being silly sometimes. :)

Kim Rodrigues

June 11, 2017 at 8:03 PM

Great! Congrats, J-Mag!

J-Mag Guthrie

June 11, 2017 at 8:13 PM

Thank you. :)

Andrea Dietrich

June 11, 2017 at 7:36 PM

this was AWESOME, congrats on your podium win.

J-Mag Guthrie

June 11, 2017 at 8:13 PM

Thank you! I'm now reading the other entries and I'm humbled to be chosen as a winner.

Darren White

June 9, 2017 at 5:08 AM

(Oh, hello there :) almost skipped over your page without checking.) Since the aliens cannot be shipped back to their respective homelands, I'd make them illegal aliens. 8-8-6-6-8. Great Limerick. Jan below (PS queen of limericks) agrees, I see :)

J-Mag Guthrie

June 9, 2017 at 7:16 AM

There is a game on A Nother Forum to write a limerick about the suggested topic, then suggest the next topic. That was my alien limerick. It was inspired by a song written (probably) by Mitch Lawyer called "The Wharton UFO" performed by the Flying Fish Sailors (may be on YouTube).