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"Alienation" Burning through the atmosphere a diamond hugs herculean, demanding, meteoric, fast like a sharp spear aimed at Zion in the obsidian night sky deep, so vast, dotted here and there with other anaemic diamantés twinkling, then dimming, as if in despair, they don’t shine as bright nor so fair, this immolator is without peer Lion of Judah, presence felt near. A shooting star into the stratosphere? Leaving a blistering debris trail in its wake. A Sonic Boom breaks through the veil sends out sound waves, touching, feeling, slightly off-rail sends out a Revelation heralding resounding eardrum shattering tear - KA-BOOM! just like some glamour chick’s walked into the room in 6 inch killer stilettos, curve hugging deep velvet the sub-level indigo blues, shaking everything in the place slams the door, her audience now captive is frozen in place, tittering amongst themselves, “Here’s something new”; the world awakes to crushed violets, heliotropes, shell pinks, eggshell pale blues; she rises above him he lifts his face. Arrival in this AlienNation no Ocean, a barren place Holding pattern and station. Her vessel lands with a thud, breaks the bedrock, dirt she steps through the portal away from it all, she’s escaping this asylum, it’s not evolving, it’s not birth a re-entry of sorts, a vacuum sucking back down to Deadly Earth. (Lovejoy-Burton/ Dec 2017) (1) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MEfqTlKPqfI

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