Alien Vapour Trail

A comet appears in our solar system From whence came this traveller

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/10/2010 3:53:00 PM

James--thanks for your commen and asking questions. I remember going out to observe comment Bennett back in the early 70's. We are very, very small. But your descriptions make life beautiful.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2010 2:49:00 PM

I like this one even better.VERY nice!

Date: 2/10/2010 11:59:00 AM

You are getting quite adept with this form. I have yet to try it. This leaves the reader to fill in the how and why. If this is for Brian's contest, best wishes. Keep on writing! Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2010 4:25:00 PM

Too deep for this earthling. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/7/2010 3:49:00 PM

good way of getting the imagism written!!