Alice In Wonderland

Plump-cheeked and bow-lipped, the stalwart mother sits reading,
corseted in her close-kept role, gathering the feminine
for like to like is drawn, a blossom-pressed, Alice sits lazing.

Straight-laced, as the time, the stripped couch holds her life's calling
falsely framed in pleated revere, smacking of each hidden sin
plump-cheeked and bow-lipped, the stalwart mother sits reading.

Her voice denies the rigid caste of ill thought mothering
a doll's denied its little mother's arms and long lost grin
for like to like is drawn, a blossom-pressed, Alice sits lazing.

All of nature calls to her but Mother seeks quiet's staging
as wilder spirits and untamed flowers wilt beneath her chin.
Plump-cheeked and bow-lipped, the stalwart mother sits reading

There'll be no romp, no rabbit chase, no rash beheading,
just Mother dear and only here within this room again.
Plump-cheeked and bow-lipped, the stalwart mother sits reading
for like to like is drawn, a blossom-pressed, Alice sits lazing.

 
Painting Alice in Wonderland by George Dunlap Leslie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bunch Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 7:23 PM
I saw this painting somewhere on this site, and yes the poem is a very accurate description. My picture was more modern with the girl in her own room, reading something herself, kind in kind, or as you said like to like, but your words, go great with the picture, really good work.
Bunch Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 7:20 PM
A very interesting Villanelle yet again, that requires more research. I didn't know leaving comments involved homework. Nice poem.
Goff Avatar
August 10, 2013 at 5:33 AM
A complex story framed...nice!
Horstkotter Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Nice poem.
Macmillan Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 12:44 PM
Hey, Sis, it is just because I'm being obsessive (lol) about MY poem, this time. Can you take a gander at the last 4-5 lines of Bait, 1986, I like the wording, but --in your opinion--what do you think of the spacing, those last lines, I mean. I like the odd way I've spaced the rest... I think you'll see the intentions... but something feels very off in the last stanza. I do like the wording (though I'm always open to ideas, better word choices) ... any ideas? Break up more? Make another verse??
Komala Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 2:26 AM
hi my sweetheart angel Debbie ...enjoyed your write...very amazing..congratulation <3 (y) luv and hugs Suki :)
Tacito Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 11:04 AM
This had me hooked. I quite enjoyed how you ended this piece. Very vivid details & expressions here.
Macmillan Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 8:49 PM
Oh man, good on you! No glazing here, no wax... only a keen eye. Yes and yes and yes... but we both know what this means, hmm? Like I've said, we've said, damn the torpedos, write with vigor and truth. Betwixt the two of us though, Bet, I am hoping I'm, ahem, wrong ;-) Deserves a gold, makes mine look like soggy pudding!!! Mwaw! xox
Posey Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 3:55 AM
In my opinion, you did a marvelous job on this... One day I will learn enough about it and gather enough nerve to attempt one... Kudos, dear... Jake
Lamoureux Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Intresting poem, I notice you have not followed the Terzanelle form in the last Stanza. Is there a reason for this?
Bunch Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 7:19 PM
yeah duh Richard, lol, j/k.
Guzzi Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 10:47 AM
duh...YES it's a villanelle
Guzzi Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 10:44 AM
thanks Richard I will check on that! ASAP
Horne Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 3:33 PM
lovely write, Debs, will have to check out this pic. Thanks - great contest : )
Konos Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 1:24 PM
I LIKEY ME DOT!
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