Alex Jordan's World

a roundel

One small part of his world of kitschy things,
Jordan's unique house on a rock unfurls
a red merry-go-round mid angels’ wings -
one small part of his world.

Chandelier lights, some twenty-thousand, swirl,
while a mechanical orchestra pings.
Two hundred sixty myriad beasts twirl
but nary a single horse rides the rings.

Stand back a little, put your mind awhirl, 
the world's largest indoor carousel brings
one small part of his world.

***
for images of this Carousel google "House on the Rock, Carousel"
it will be worth your time.

won first place in nette onclaud's Carousel in Roundel, August 19, 2013
written August 12, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Anglesey Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 3:26 PM
A beautifully imaged visual written with the elegant and breezy feel of being on a carousel. Congratulations on your well deserved win :)
Poteet Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Thank you, Karen, if you are ever in Wisconsin, look it up.
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 4:08 AM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
A  Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Reason, congratulations in the CAROUSEL IN ROUNDEL contest... SKAT
Jones Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 4:13 PM
Wow....congratulations awesome..
Poet Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 1:05 PM
Congrats Reason on your top win in the contest!Beautifully written.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 8:35 AM
I see why Nette chose this one for top spot, congrats!
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 11:38 PM
Readon this is ex...well done and congrats...Seren
Mannan Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 10:52 PM
Many congrats on your win. A wonderful write.
Morgan Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 7:25 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Richards Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 6:54 PM
I love the unique take you wrote about.....a different carousel ride !!
A   Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 4:44 PM
Reason, Thanks for the wonderful "CAROUSEL" ride.... Congratulations with your winning poem in Nette's contest. always & forever *PD :-)
Guzzi Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 3:46 PM
Very evocative! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 2:58 PM
oops, you WERE top win. Yours tied for first with one other.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 2:57 PM
aha, I see you came in close to the top with this one!! BIG congrats to you. HOpe others see it too.
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 11:28 PM
So beautiful. And I saw the video on youtube too. You should put this link under your poem: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QgzBDXwmxRQ It makes it a wee bit faster to google!
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