Alabaster Night

Untroubled is the quiet night
How peaceful is a world that glimmers white
Frost and moonlight have whipped a silver glaze
And silhouettes of trees are black as ink 
The only sign of life are whiffs of breath

I stand transfixed beneath the sky, 
to rest my mind with reverent eyes
upon the silky wonderland of snow
 
Among these masqueraded hills,
the night's aurora soothes my soul
Winter has dressed our world in alabaster white
Familiar landmarks wear a new disguise

And yet, we'll see the sky remains the same 
where a thousand thorny sparks have kept their flames
burning low to light the dark
They welcome us like longtime friends.
These polished stars against the sky,
are brilliant new, with points honed thistle sharp

How peaceful is a planet that shimmers bright,
that to stand in voiceless wonder and gaze,
If we were to speak, the crystal world could shatter,
too fragile to bear the weight of words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kroll Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 8:04 AM
A beautiful description. It carries us there under the stars. I love the ending Too fragile to bear the weight of words. Kathy
Joseph Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:32 AM
ooopsss... enjoyable... nice soup....happy new year.
Sergi Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:04 PM
Hi Carrie: A beautiful poetic description of the colored night.
Staton Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 6:39 PM
Nicely written. Wonderful imagery.
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Raman Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 10:51 AM
Carrie Know only little about poetry Just enough to show The beauty of your poem Has captured my imagination now. Wonderful poem. Congratulations! Ganapathiraman Raghu Raman
Schneiter Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 7:23 AM
Carrie: The imagery in this poem is awesome. As I went from line to line, I marveled at the word pictures you created together with inspiring introspection. It's a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it.
A   Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:46 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
Nunez Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 12:25 PM
Just beautiful, Carrie. You brought us there...on top of the world to view this awesome, magnificently delicate sight, with such clear and crisp words of imagery. Congratulations! Kim :)
Devnath  Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:26 AM
Skilfully crafted with a great imagery of peace unon the sky. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Freeman Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 10:56 AM
Beautiful free verse, with a beautiful word, describing a beautiful poem, Carrie. Hi, hope you are well, Agape, Moses
Reams Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Wow! I love the part drink upon the sky! Great write Carrie. Congrats on your win. Well deserved!
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 4:12 PM
So beautiful, Carrie. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Dropping back with my congrats again carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
Ebbs Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Congrats on your win Carrie, a peaceful planet would be welcomed any time or place :)
Roper Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 9:04 AM
What a wonderful lulling poem,Carrie, congratulations on your win. Blessings
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 8:17 AM
{points thistle sharp GREAT metaphor!] Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Meier-Hans Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 3:06 PM
Very beautiful poem Carrie. Congratulations on your first place top win.
Yvonne Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:52 PM
You are one of my favourite poets. This is just another one of those writes that solidifies my feelings about your talent. You are a great poet. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win. A Fav for me!
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Wow! Carrie, this is truly stunning... Congrats on a much deserved top placement... Faving this one, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Mohn Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 1:29 PM
What skillful art this is with such a beautiful crescendo to the 4th stanza
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 1:20 PM
congratulations Carrie on your win, nicely written
Haight Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Carrie, a heartfelt congratulations to you for your 1st Place win on this awesome poem. I can feel the peace and wonder through your words. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 8:36 AM
Way to go Carrie. A warmly frigid hug from winter. Well deserved to spot.
Gorelick Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Stunning, the phrase "alabaster white" is beautiful. congrats. BG
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