Airtight Life

There's a fire in the morning, colored grey
but today's not the day for seeing
not for you..

look at your hands, wonders they've seen
though perhaps too few 
please tell me yours
the fading dreams
in our curfew..

being so close to a heartbeat
so familiar  
yet not mine
feel it so dear
such a mark..

pay no attention, those machines
with subtle drone 
they count life different    
through lovely skin turned  
translucent
still your own.

and who knows, ah..., who indeed 
streaming in tears 
grey strands of rhyme 
your time
and so thankful,
mine. 

there'll appear a door
where all's right
though torpedo'd 
your ship remains
in spirit
airtight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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February 25, 2023 at 7:22 PM
This is so mysterious, tinged with sorrow and loss but still comforting, will have to fave it for further pondering~
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