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Airplane Flight

Somewhere as I write, a plane’s acceleration Against the onrush of wind, gaining speed Defying gravity’s norms, lifting, struggling, While a hundred people or more prepare Feigning relaxation for the journey ahead, A plethora of emotions, some feeling dread As the silver tube pierces cold, stagnant air Attendants, beverages and snacks juggling, Attempt to meet weary passengers’ need Each one eagerly anticipating a destination. Written March 8, 2022 [Verso-Rhyme]

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/9/2022 6:58:00 PM

So very much in between the lines here, Milt. I like the understated tone. Cooly penned. ~ Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/9/2022 7:37:00 PM

I agree, gw. There are several poems suggested in this poem. I was on a transportation kick, I think.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 3/8/2022 8:40:00 PM

What makes a verso-rhyme?

L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/8/2022 8:48:00 PM

Hmmm...it's my own invention, which I discovered was apparent in a number of my poems. The poem follows a rhyme pattern about half-way through, then rhymes back the other way. Look at the poem carefully, and you'll see it. "ahead" and "dread" are the midpoint, then "air" rhymes with "prepare." Etc.