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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5. Centered, no rhyme.

I cannot see the ocean of air that engulfs me though I inhale it and depend on it for my life and yet I feel its tactile touch tickle my bare skin as it morphs into a breeze and flows over me (Yalto) 03/04/2020

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Heidi Sands

Date: 3/4/2020 4:20:00 PM

Very nice and relaxing :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/5/2020 8:46:00 AM

Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/4/2020 12:12:00 PM

A beautiful yalto! Fun to write, eh?! Hugs...Kim

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/4/2020 12:15:00 PM

Thanks Kim, yes I am quite found of this form, I find it flows well...I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.