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Air - Anxiety - Sapphic Stanza

Parachuting has its advantage – Freefall! Flying, screaming, scareder than ever prior Chute won’t open! Now I am coming, gliding Hope MY chute opens! (fiction) 2/28/2019

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2019 9:07:00 PM

haha, funny one . I like this even better.

Andrew Fairchild
Date: 3/2/2019 11:11:00 PM

Onlyl funny, if it's not YOUR parachute that doesn't open! But thanks! I am glad you like it! Note: NEVER PACK YOUR OWN PARACHUTE, I have heard, HAVE AN EXPERT DO IT!

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/28/2019 3:49:00 PM

"scareder than ever prior" made me laugh which is awful cause someone is in trouble!

Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/28/2019 3:53:00 PM

That's all right! There is no such word as 'scareder', it's 'more scared', so maybe my neologism made you laugh. I always appreciate laughter! ;D