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Aim Awry - Footles

Stupid
Cupid

“Aim’s off!”
I scoff

His bow
Hit low

Beau's voice
Once choice

Awry	
Now high




*Entry for Dane Ann’s Valentine Footles contest

Copyright © Carolyn Devonshire | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/9/2012 8:35:00 AM It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Carolyn. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 2/20/2012 8:45:00 AM " YOUR AIM : CLASS GAME " . Another bull's eye from your talented pen , CD, and well deserved .... Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/17/2012 1:51:00 PM Congrats on your win! Blessings,Rhonda Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/17/2012 9:34:00 AM hahahaha, I remember this one. GREAT that you won. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/16/2012 2:24:00 PM I've been calling Carolyn...I wish I was close enough to stop by! Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 2/16/2012 10:23:00 AM Carolyn, A very clever set of Footles, I really enjoyed them. Congratulations for your 4th place win in Dane Ann's contest.......S.Ronthorpe Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 2/16/2012 8:49:00 AM Congratulations on your win with these cute footles. They will be running through my head all day now. Love, joyce Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/16/2012 8:47:00 AM Congrats on your win Carolyn. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/16/2012 8:42:00 AM congrats Carolyn on a great win for a great set of Fottles for Valentine's Day luv.. Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 2/16/2012 7:48:00 AM Stupid cupid is so funny! about time someone told him the truth! ha! congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 2/8/2012 1:49:00 PM LOL, love these footles : ) Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 2/8/2012 11:31:00 AM Yikes now you got me smiling Carolyn, glad you could get the new computer and good to be reading your work again. All the best for the contest, love you Wilma Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/8/2012 8:01:00 AM I love you footle Sweet Caroline,How are you? Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/7/2012 10:12:00 PM Your footles are so cute and clever! With the divorce rate more than 50 percent, I guess cupid does miss sometimes. I loved reading your poems tonight. Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/7/2012 8:20:00 PM Very Good Set of Footles by you Carolyn.A winner here.Best wishes. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/7/2012 7:46:00 PM haha, you did a really cute little set, CArolyn. Sure to be a HIT!!! Login to Reply

Deck Fitzgerald Date: 2/7/2012 5:33:00 PM Best of luck with this lovely fun read Carolyn , Hugs and best wishes Declan xx Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 2/7/2012 5:28:00 PM What a great poem my friend! I especially likes the first footle, "Stupid Cupid" that one is pretty funny! It flows very well! I love them all Carolyn! Great Work!! Login to Reply