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Aim Awry - Footles

Stupid Cupid “Aim’s off!” I scoff His bow Hit low Beau's voice Once choice Awry Now high *Entry for Dane Ann’s Valentine Footles contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2012 8:35:00 AM

It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Carolyn. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/20/2012 8:45:00 AM

" YOUR AIM : CLASS GAME " . Another bull's eye from your talented pen , CD, and well deserved ....

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/17/2012 1:51:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Blessings,Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2012 9:34:00 AM

hahahaha, I remember this one. GREAT that you won.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2012 2:24:00 PM

I've been calling Carolyn...I wish I was close enough to stop by! Congrad's Light & Love

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/16/2012 10:23:00 AM

Carolyn, A very clever set of Footles, I really enjoyed them. Congratulations for your 4th place win in Dane Ann's contest.......S.Ronthorpe

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/16/2012 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with these cute footles. They will be running through my head all day now. Love, joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2012 8:47:00 AM

Congrats on your win Carolyn. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2012 8:42:00 AM

congrats Carolyn on a great win for a great set of Fottles for Valentine's Day luv..

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/16/2012 7:48:00 AM

Stupid cupid is so funny! about time someone told him the truth! ha! congrats on your win!

Jack Horne

Date: 2/8/2012 1:49:00 PM

LOL, love these footles : )

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/8/2012 11:31:00 AM

Yikes now you got me smiling Carolyn, glad you could get the new computer and good to be reading your work again. All the best for the contest, love you Wilma

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/8/2012 8:01:00 AM

I love you footle Sweet Caroline,How are you?

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/7/2012 10:12:00 PM

Your footles are so cute and clever! With the divorce rate more than 50 percent, I guess cupid does miss sometimes. I loved reading your poems tonight. Blessings, Rhonda

Kash Poet

Date: 2/7/2012 8:20:00 PM

Very Good Set of Footles by you Carolyn.A winner here.Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2012 7:46:00 PM

haha, you did a really cute little set, CArolyn. Sure to be a HIT!!!

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 2/7/2012 5:33:00 PM

Best of luck with this lovely fun read Carolyn , Hugs and best wishes Declan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/7/2012 5:28:00 PM

What a great poem my friend! I especially likes the first footle, "Stupid Cupid" that one is pretty funny! It flows very well! I love them all Carolyn! Great Work!!