Aight?

come up ta my crib, he adlibbed 
bump bellies wid me, wid what god gived
we’ll part da sheets likes Moses sea
little mama we’ll be on a kissin spree

we’ll drink some wine and smoke some grass
invite in d’ crew and make some cash
and by dat neon light shining
dhey’ll be some booty reclining

hell wid the flowers get the stash
‘fore the po po come ‘rest ‘ur ****
bump jeans wid me baby y’ur so fine
don’t pay no ‘tention to the line 

be my Baby Momma its aight
maybe ‘ll take you home tonight

*An inner city parody of Come Live with me and be my Love by Christopher Marlowe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 6, 2010 at 3:57 AM
Dis iz Da bomb lol- Congrats De`b- have you heard `Baby Boy Da Prince`???
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 9:38 PM
Just finally seeing who won in this one. I'd say you sure deseved to be in the circle. Congratulations,Deb!
Johnson Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 8:41 AM
lCongratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 5:40 AM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Parody contest with this exquisite write ..a well deserved win for my TEACH ... enjoy ..luv.. pupil..
Mehta Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 2:52 AM
Congrats on the win, Deborah
Dvorkis Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Cute concept Deb.Didn't figgah u for da inna city type but hey, fo' shizzle. Married life's good. We already act like we've been married for 20 years. Wasn't much of an adjustment for us to be honest. I'm a strong advocate of living together first for a few years. That way you get used to all the fun habits and quirks before you tie the knot.
Belt Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 12:37 PM
LOL Awesome......Larry
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 7:55 PM
hahaha. you did this one RIGHT> I did not see too many that were actually parodies of that poem he showed us. Even mine was not quite "there" as this one is! I kind of strayed a bit from the topic but you kept it to new age love. Andrea
Green Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:46 PM
Pretty darn good! LOL
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May 17, 2010 at 5:26 PM
LOL, funny write, great parody!;)
Budd Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Haha Funny thing is I can so see every bit of this. I'm not familiar with the other sonnet but yours alone is fantastic. The best of luck in the contest.
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May 15, 2010 at 6:03 PM
Hi Deb. Your talent is so diverse. You captured the dialect and the life styles of many people who live life by the wine, smoke, and arse. (Wink) Nice capture for this modern parody. Good luck in the contest. Love, Dane
Kendrick Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 4:32 PM
I'll bet that one was hard to write...Good job...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing....Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Cheeseman Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 2:41 AM
Loved this Deborah, bump jeans with me, loved it
Strand Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 12:23 AM
Nice take on the sonnet Debbie.Rgds Brian
Sweetheart Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 7:01 PM
BRAVO! Brilliante... as they say on the jewelry network... awesome and absolutely a winner..hope Nathan "gets it" ..this one is cool...gonna make it a fav so when my eyes clear up I can enjoy it all over again..luv.. oh ..I removed the dots............ my trademark ...bye bye for now..luv.. foggy pupil....luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 6:52 PM
Thanks for supporting my poem. I first smiled and than laughed
Cwiak Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 10:28 AM
I lived in the inner city and have heard some of the things you wrote! Keep up the work! Dan C
Anderson Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Hey Deb! A very nice write...hugs, Jimmy
Flach Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 9:09 PM
Nicely done Deborah. Reminds me of the scene in Airplane with the old lady who "talks jive". This should do very well in the contest. Thanks for the fun read. Joe
Johnson Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Wow!! that's a far out one. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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May 13, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Well done D.G. sounds like music to my ears. How you been, take care,..p.d.
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