Aight?

come up ta my crib, he adlibbed 
bump bellies wid me, wid what god gived
we’ll part da sheets likes Moses sea
little mama we’ll be on a kissin spree

we’ll drink some wine and smoke some grass
invite in d’ crew and make some cash
and by dat neon light shining
dhey’ll be some booty reclining

hell wid the flowers get the stash
‘fore the po po come ‘rest ‘ur ****
bump jeans wid me baby y’ur so fine
don’t pay no ‘tention to the line 

be my Baby Momma its aight
maybe ‘ll take you home tonight

*An inner city parody of Come Live with me and be my Love by Christopher Marlowe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/6/2010 3:57:00 AM
Dis iz Da bomb lol- Congrats De`b- have you heard `Baby Boy Da Prince`???
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:38:00 PM
Just finally seeing who won in this one. I'd say you sure deseved to be in the circle. Congratulations,Deb!
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Date: 6/5/2010 8:41:00 AM
lCongratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:40:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Parody contest with this exquisite write ..a well deserved win for my TEACH ... enjoy ..luv.. pupil..
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Date: 6/5/2010 2:52:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Deborah
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Date: 5/21/2010 1:27:00 PM
Cute concept Deb.Didn't figgah u for da inna city type but hey, fo' shizzle. Married life's good. We already act like we've been married for 20 years. Wasn't much of an adjustment for us to be honest. I'm a strong advocate of living together first for a few years. That way you get used to all the fun habits and quirks before you tie the knot.
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Date: 5/21/2010 12:37:00 PM
LOL Awesome......Larry
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Date: 5/19/2010 7:55:00 PM
hahaha. you did this one RIGHT> I did not see too many that were actually parodies of that poem he showed us. Even mine was not quite "there" as this one is! I kind of strayed a bit from the topic but you kept it to new age love. Andrea
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:46:00 PM
Pretty darn good! LOL
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:26:00 PM
LOL, funny write, great parody!;)
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Date: 5/17/2010 3:37:00 PM
Haha Funny thing is I can so see every bit of this. I'm not familiar with the other sonnet but yours alone is fantastic. The best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/15/2010 6:03:00 PM
Hi Deb. Your talent is so diverse. You captured the dialect and the life styles of many people who live life by the wine, smoke, and arse. (Wink) Nice capture for this modern parody. Good luck in the contest. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:32:00 PM
I'll bet that one was hard to write...Good job...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing....Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 5/15/2010 2:41:00 AM
Loved this Deborah, bump jeans with me, loved it
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Date: 5/15/2010 12:23:00 AM
Nice take on the sonnet Debbie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/14/2010 7:01:00 PM
BRAVO! Brilliante... as they say on the jewelry network... awesome and absolutely a winner..hope Nathan "gets it" ..this one is cool...gonna make it a fav so when my eyes clear up I can enjoy it all over again..luv.. oh ..I removed the dots............ my trademark ...bye bye for now..luv.. foggy pupil....luv..
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Date: 5/14/2010 6:52:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my poem. I first smiled and than laughed
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Date: 5/14/2010 10:28:00 AM
I lived in the inner city and have heard some of the things you wrote! Keep up the work! Dan C
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Date: 5/14/2010 8:08:00 AM
Hey Deb! A very nice write...hugs, Jimmy
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Date: 5/13/2010 9:09:00 PM
Nicely done Deborah. Reminds me of the scene in Airplane with the old lady who "talks jive". This should do very well in the contest. Thanks for the fun read. Joe
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Date: 5/13/2010 6:17:00 PM
Wow!! that's a far out one. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/13/2010 6:09:00 PM
Well done D.G. sounds like music to my ears. How you been, take care,..p.d.
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