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6/12/2025 for Why I Hate AI Generated Poems Poetry Contest sponsored by JCB Brul

AI Existential Terror

a poem woke with a silent scream to find his mom was a machine

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Ann Peck

June 28, 2025 at 2:48 PM

I love your poem! It describes the problem perfectly! Congratulations.

David Crandall

June 28, 2025 at 9:13 PM

Thanks so much Ann!

Reason A. Poteet

June 17, 2025 at 6:39 AM

Likewise, spectacular thought, David. Third person excellence. Congratulations.

David Crandall

June 17, 2025 at 4:14 PM

Thanks, Reason!

Krish Radhakrishna

June 16, 2025 at 10:16 PM

Brilliant write! great concept! Well deserved top win! Congrats David!!

David Crandall

June 17, 2025 at 4:14 PM

Thanks, Krish!

Unseeking Seeker

June 16, 2025 at 8:03 PM

Brilliant! Congratulations on your top win, David.

David Crandall

June 17, 2025 at 4:13 PM

Thanks, Unseeking Seeker!

Kim Rodrigues

June 16, 2025 at 6:35 PM

Oh no! Sounds like the Stepford wives! Top Congrats!

David Crandall

June 16, 2025 at 7:02 PM

haha - yeah, kinda, - ever seen the movie Ex Machina? kinda like that.

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2025 at 3:05 PM

Oh wow. Really inventive. Congrats on top place

David Crandall

June 16, 2025 at 7:01 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

Paula Goldsmith

June 16, 2025 at 10:49 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "AI Existential Terror" write. Thanks for the laugh. Have a fun/blessed day with your win.......

David Crandall

June 16, 2025 at 7:01 PM

Thanks, Paula!

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 16, 2025 at 9:59 AM

- David :))) ...well done, with a smile :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

David Crandall

June 16, 2025 at 7:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise!

Line Gauthier

June 16, 2025 at 8:40 AM

lol ~ good one, David

David Crandall

June 16, 2025 at 6:59 PM

Thanks, Line!

Crystol Woods

June 16, 2025 at 6:52 AM

Excellent David!!! Perfection! With a human element of course! Xo

David Crandall

June 16, 2025 at 6:59 PM

Thanks, Crystol!

Valsa George

June 16, 2025 at 4:31 AM

This is Excellent! Congratulations on your top win, dear David !

David Crandall

June 16, 2025 at 6:58 PM

Thanks, Valsa!

CayCay Godwin

June 16, 2025 at 1:43 AM

I'M SO PROUD OF YOU! David Crandall, the one, the only, the amazing, out of the box sentence of thought, he wrote a real screamer!!! I never read it, and it is perfect. It is a great line, will FAV. SO PROUD. CayCay

David Crandall

June 16, 2025 at 6:57 PM

Thanks, CayCay! I went with the AI creepiness factor.