Ah, Perfection

Ah, perfection…..

The ever-sweet concoction of confection
Color inside the lines no deviation
No platypus designs in this creation
Be British, never rise above your station

Perfection….
We’re told we’ll never get there - so why try
Achieving naught but failure till we die
Listening to teachers sadly sigh
While wiping way the tears we couldn’t cry

One size would never fit us all
From birth until we slowly learn to crawl
Neither can one bag collect the leaves of fall
Nor mute the changing tone of winter’s pall

Cold harriers will stalk the written word
Slash it with a heartless wooden sword
For using words that they could not afford
To describe a mud rimmed pond as a fjord

So strive to be the best that you can be
Remembering that freedom isn’t free
And as you etch the page with flowing ink
There is much room between red’s edge - and pink


John G. Lawless
©4/4/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 6:54 PM
a priori -- a fjordi ~ Not too wordy
Blown Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 8:40 AM
...perfection is........a half glassof hot coffee, artificial sweetner, shot of choclate syrup....topped off by diet pepsi....... carbonated coffee'.......stans sand
Kyser Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 8:18 AM
that's glorious, John. well done indeed
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 5:46 AM
Good grief this is a phenomenal penning. Blown me away this one. Dare I say, perfection! xomo
Lawless Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 6:01 AM
AW....PSHAW.....Y'ER MAKIN' ME BLUSH
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