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you entered my foundation silence abode the quaint structures of a meaningful gothic erosion between a quiet reasoning as I opened above the perfect foundery beckoning precision of a sensitive naught that quivered and quaked throughout a bias time tinged with morality that craved an infamous pout where you collected shells of sadness and compassion well crafted amid the calm sea forming a gentle finish abraisive an yet shattered feelings abroad that read I love you back

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Date: 8/28/2013 12:19:00 PM
Wow, very good Yolanda...this is a lovely free-flowing ballard you have here. Great use of words, subtle but apparent as well -Very Good! MC
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/15/2024 2:02:00 AM
Thank you so muchany blessings
Date: 6/22/2012 2:59:00 PM
i love you too,great write Yolando
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 4/15/2024 2:02:00 AM
Many blessings thank you

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