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Ah Hamburg

you entered my foundation 
silence abode the quaint structures 
of a meaningful gothic erosion
between a quiet reasoning 

as I opened above the perfect 
foundery beckoning precision 
of a sensitive naught that quivered 
and quaked throughout a bias time
 
tinged with morality that craved 
an infamous pout where you collected 
shells of sadness and compassion 
well crafted amid the calm sea
 
forming a gentle finish abraisive 
an yet shattered feelings abroad 
that read I love you back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/28/2013 12:19:00 PM
Wow, very good Yolanda...this is a lovely free-flowing ballard you have here. Great use of words, subtle but apparent as well -Very Good! MC
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Yolanda Joy Nicholsen
Date: 4/15/2024 2:02:00 AM
Thank you so muchany blessings
Date: 6/22/2012 2:59:00 PM
i love you too,great write Yolando
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Yolanda Joy Nicholsen
Date: 4/15/2024 2:02:00 AM
Many blessings thank you

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