Ah Hamburg

you entered my foundation 
silence abode the quaint structures 
of a meaningful gothic erosion
between a quiet reasoning 

as I opened above the perfect 
foundery beckoning precision 
of a sensitive naught that quivered 
and quaked throughout a bias time
 
tinged with morality that craved 
an infamous pout where you collected 
shells of sadness and compassion 
well crafted amid the calm sea
 
forming a gentle finish abraisive 
an yet shattered feelings abroad 
that read I love you back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 12:19 PM
Wow, very good Yolanda...this is a lovely free-flowing ballard you have here. Great use of words, subtle but apparent as well -Very Good! MC
Nicholsen Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 2:02 AM
Thank you so muchany blessings
Palmer Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 2:59 PM
i love you too,great write Yolando
Nicholsen Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 2:02 AM
Many blessings thank you
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