Agony

Edward.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This poem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings!

Hi Ed, another excellent write my friend. Your deep words cut through the dark. I have seen the gentle passing into death first hand, this i would have at my end but as always i shall take my end as it comes. This is a deeply heartfelt write Ed and it deserves every view it gets and then some. Let the Soul sing Ed. Your Friend....Vladislav. A seven for sure Ed

Ed, beautifully penned, I love the deep darkness in your words , A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, tattered pages

The raw emotions within your words capture the heart with their strength of truth while devastating the soul with their sadness. Emile. #7

Ed, yes with death there is peace, I know this is true, but the pain for those left behind is a life of pain, and for sure some deaths are far from peaceful, you captured this very well in your poem, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem Oh the grief. . . and although my poetry is always melancholy, I smile a lot and enjoy life very much . . .I am very good at putting a mask on to hide the grief, only in poetry can I let it flow . . .

Wow!!!! This hit home .. Speechless thank you for making me feel not alone

with death there is peace - oh so poignant in my life now Ed dad is at peace and has eternal rest - great write good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx