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Agitated mind contracts heart Self-blocking bliss delight Tragic life, when head and heart part Distanced from divine light Cessation shows the way Making life journey play Joyful through night and day Gripped in ego bind Agitated mind 23-November-2021 Quietus

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Date: 11/24/2021 11:09:00 PM
"gripped in ego bind" - this is for sure.
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Date: 11/24/2021 11:51:00 PM
Easy to see, difficult to fix!
Date: 11/23/2021 10:58:00 PM
Perfect quietus. ~~
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Date: 11/23/2021 11:05:00 PM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 11/23/2021 6:21:00 AM
Thought provoking piece , excellent rhyme, hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/23/2021 6:25:00 AM
Thank you, Jan!

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