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Aging Autumn Leaves

Aging Autumn leaves at play it's innocence gone born from brand new day it covers thick and hides the way how long l wait, it will not say. Then it's gold, fades from me too and memories eye are just a few aging Autumn leaves at play my life lv seen in that one day.

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James Inman

Date: 10/16/2017 8:21:00 AM

A deep retrospective write Jackie. Smooth rhyme.

Jackie Elston
Date: 10/16/2017 9:31:00 AM

thanks James for comment. lv just realised when l just reread my poem, is that l don't know if its spelt 'aging' or 'ageing' lol.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/3/2017 2:43:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Jackie I adore the autumn and her dress of brown orange and gold:-) hugs jan xx

Jackie Elston
Date: 7/3/2017 3:01:00 PM

thank you so much for the kind comment. l always feel so blessed we have such lovely Autumns in the UK. l long for them all yr. take care.Jackie x