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Aged Hands

She waits with her aged, folded hands Hands with deep veins and those age spots Hands that picked and shelled beans so grand After her trips to garden plots Where the sun bakes those who have-not Only they, her hands understand Watching; sips tea with bergamot She waits with her aged, folded hands Now she rests, thinking of coastlands As a young one within earshot Bored, thinking inheritance lands Hands with deep veins, many age spots Keep on loving, like it or not As she toiled in the garden and Fed hungry mouths with money-squat Hands that picked and shelled beans so grand Rest sometimes, and understands Restlessness of youth in Camelot Seeking their own life, in fairyland After her trip to the garden plot She felt quite ill, but did not stop She needs to tell all, life she understands As they lower her in the plot Her dress neatly lays and demands Her aged, folded hand
Written: June 18, 2022 First one like this posted on soup.
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Kerr Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 3:19 AM
Hi Sara, Stunning and spectacular portrayal employing language of vibrant depth and sympathy. Another artistic triumph on your part. Thanks for praising my works Howard
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 8:55 AM
The high praise was just what I needed this morn, Howard. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment on my work/s. Sara K
George Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 1:10 AM
With Years, her hands have aged and wrinkled. Once they were so busy toiling ! now they need rest .... Old age and its accompanying fatigue, beautifully illustrated....
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 3:46 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara
Edmonds  Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 8:00 PM
A beautiful Rondeau Redouble Sara, love the tale of her aged folded hands… Belle
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 2:58 AM
Thank you, Belle, I appreciate the kind review. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 4:27 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Sara! Vivid imagery throughout the poem, too.
Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 5:14 AM
Edward, Your comment is uplifting. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 4:12 AM
You gave her a voice in this poem. Insightful write, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Why, thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 1:42 AM
Admire the details in this lovely poem.
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 3:28 AM
Thank you, Victor. Sara
Reese Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 9:30 PM
A very nice story with this style. You have great imagery. 1 error though. Verse 6 is missing a line. You need a line after line 3 that will rhyme with plot.
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 3:23 AM
Thank you, Charles, for knowing enough about the form to find the error. I have corrected it. I did not write a first line to the last stanza. Sara
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