Age: My Wise Councelor

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" AGE'S MANY FACES " MY PHOTO, ©

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Oh, Age, my wise counselor,
My faithful friend, my ally
From the moment, I was born at that specific year
You and I inseparable have remained throughout space and time
Holding always hands as years were parading before our 
Very eyes.

Never were we separated,
Although when young, eager was I to advance faster ahead  
And when older I grew, I wished to linger a little bit behind
However,
You, my wise adviser, ceaselessly, were unyielding  
Advising me by your side to stay at all time   
For
Only by doing so, you told me, happy I would be,
If in harmony with you I proceed and at the proper pace
In that way, you declared, I could see and learn to appreciate
The things as they really are and not as they appear to be at  
Any given instant.

Thus

Together through an impressive string of stunning transformations went:
At first, we were young and fresh, daring and provoking,
Also inquisitive and challenging we were, energetic and resourceful
So
The pick of our vigor we soon reached and succeeded in
Celebrating life.

The years though started passing faster than before, and
The mood, eventually did change: 
Thus more cautious we became,
Less daring, 
Less challenging, 
Less energetic, and less eager
But
Always interested we were to see what towards us
Was coming.
 
One day gray hair appeared that soon turned into white
And shortly after wrinkles started to be apparent
But
You and I, my friend, clinched we were to one-another so
Never let each other’s hand
For
All these years I have learned to trust you, your
Wisdom and your judgment
Because
You never stopped to amaze me, you never ceased new lessons 
To provide
So
I grew up and fell in love with whatever I was doing.

Till my last moment, I know very well, that you will not
Let me down
For
Your faces are innumerable, your teaching is unending 
The rewards you have offered me so far, and those to me you still
Intend to offer, no matter how old I come to be, all of them are
Precious, blessed, and all divine.  

Now that life’s road I see is coming to an ending
I would like, from the bottom of my heart, to thank you, oh age,
For holding, firmly, my hand for a number of blessed decades  
Cause
I know that such a chance, to a lot of my friends, was 
Never to them presented.

For all these reasons, Age my adoring friend, from me
You will never hear complaints
For 
I have come to know so well that as long as I keep getting old
Able I would be, alive to remain,  
Thus
How could I not grateful be to you, my generous
Loving Age?








© Demetrios Trifiatis
    23 June 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/23/2021 12:02:00 PM
You amaze me with your wonderful poetry. As we grow we learn every second and we should pass on our learnings to younger generation like you do through your poems. Really love the flower pictures you put on top of your poems. So beautiful.
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Date: 6/23/2021 2:07:00 PM
Your visit and your comment are very gracious, my dearest friend, Rama. I thank you very much. God bless you.
Date: 6/23/2021 9:27:00 AM
Wisdom has given us the gift of age as we pass by and grow wit each year with knowledge and experience. Love your journey. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/23/2021 2:05:00 PM
Eve, so nice to see you again. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Blessings and hugs xxx
Date: 6/23/2021 7:30:00 AM
A truly inspiring verse, written with outstanding insight; every verse is a piece of literature packed with poignant experience ; I'm benefiting greatly from your writing, my dear Demetrios. You did a great job of illustrating life lessons, all throughout this poem, and the image is especially warming. Have a wonderful and peaceful day
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Date: 6/23/2021 2:04:00 PM
Thank you so much for your generous comment, my friend, Lasaad. It is so kind of you to visit. God bless you.
Date: 6/23/2021 5:24:00 AM
Absolutely great. I have no words to appreciate, all I can do is to bow before your wisdom and experience. You have depicted a beautiful lesson through this words of wisdom. Thank you so much for sharing... I also loved those vibrant flowers ...
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Date: 6/23/2021 6:38:00 AM
Supraja, my dearest friend, your words humble me. Thank you for your generous comment. God bless you with a long and healthy life. Blessings. Hugs xxx
Date: 6/23/2021 5:05:00 AM
Enjoyed the journey in your wisdom words my friend. Those wrinkles are indicative of the knowledge gained and dispersed on the world stage. Kudos to you for all you have achieved. Thank you for the flower bouquet in your photo.
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Date: 6/23/2021 6:35:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation and for your good words, my dearest friend, Vijay. I am trying to share the fruits of my experience so as to add to the understanding of life. God bless you.
Date: 6/23/2021 1:56:00 AM
We have to be thankful for age Demetrios for it has brought us experience and most importantly wisdom for without them we wouldn't have become the people that we are. A very thought provoking verse. Tom
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Date: 6/23/2021 2:11:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment, my dearest friend, Tom. Blessings!
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