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Age Doesn'T Matter When You'Re In Love

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There is just something about his soft skin, he has the complexion of an ivory turtle dove. Maybe he’ll light my heart deep within, I guess age doesn’t matter when you’re in love. Some may call this situation a sin, I call it falling in love with my soulmate Brinn. He may be older but together we are wise, he sees me for the woman I always longed to be. When I look into those deep chestnut eyes, I see everything I’ve always wanted to see, and I guess it can be no great surprise, but about his age Brinn never lies. He’s more mature than other men I know, feeds me good intellect and expresses his feelings. Of this intimate feeling I shall never let go, for he brings my pitiful heart healing. Releases my passion; may it free itself and grow, he was born in heaven and has fallen down below. Who says age should stand between my love and I? they don’t hear my heart, the pitter-patter. My friends put me down, always make me cry, but I swear, in true love age does not matter. So, I sit here by my windowpane and wonder why, I can’t live without him even if I could try, cause...age is not a good reason to ever say goodbye. Age Doesn't Matter When You're In Love Contest Julie Leigh Rodeheaver December 14, 2017

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Date: 12/19/2017 11:09:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win! Beautiful write and insight into love! Best wishes!
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Date: 12/18/2017 9:13:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win!
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Date: 12/18/2017 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations dear poetess! xomo :)
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Date: 12/18/2017 12:20:00 PM
Hi Laura, You did a good job with the contest theme. Good content and rhymes. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/18/2017 8:47:00 AM
Laura, very apt, romantic sentiment for Julie's challenging theme ... I always admire poets who take on the additional challenge of rhyme, and you've pulled it off with wonderful words. Well deserved recognition. I enjoy it. Dave
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Date: 12/18/2017 5:26:00 AM
Beaitiful romantic lines...Love has no age limit.. you cant help what the heart feels..
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Date: 12/18/2017 8:27:00 AM
so true! My hubby is only 3 years older than me, but yet, he's turning 40 next week so I am bragging about being younger for once. lol thanks sweet SO, -lulooo
Date: 12/18/2017 1:27:00 AM
If only it could be so simple. Great write.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/18/2017 8:26:00 AM
thank you dear James :) -luloo
Date: 12/16/2017 9:06:00 AM
Great thoughts, Luloo:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2017 11:59:00 AM
many thanks sweetest jo! :) -luloo
Date: 12/15/2017 4:05:00 PM
You have evoked true love, Laura. Good Luck!
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Date: 12/16/2017 11:59:00 AM
many thanks Ralph :)-luloo
Date: 12/15/2017 11:35:00 AM
Nicely done girl... luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2017 11:59:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve :) -luloo
Date: 12/15/2017 7:39:00 AM
True love is not conditional. Nice poem.Good luck.
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Date: 12/16/2017 11:58:00 AM
many thanks Rajat :) -luloo
Date: 12/15/2017 5:04:00 AM
A beautiful, sweet love poem, Laura. Good luck in the contest. John
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2017 11:58:00 AM
thank you dear John! :) -luloo

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