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Age Does Not Matter

Age does not matter It does not matter As to who you are It comes in all ages His sister had a shock She went to her son Knocked on the door Then she rang the bell Being scared she called The police department As soon as the door opened She rushed inside Looking on the floor She saw her son laid On the hall carpet Shocked she screamed The police told her That her son was dead There was no blood shown A coroner will check the body To see the cause of death Her son was young His age only Forty-four See age does not matter

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Date: 2/15/2022 5:53:00 AM
Age doesn't matter, true. Keep pen busy.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/15/2022 7:18:00 AM
Hello Ajun, I will Ajun. I hope you have a lovely day. Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/8/2022 3:54:00 AM
That's true Darlene, age does not matter,my nephew passed away aged 31.
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Date: 2/8/2022 10:29:00 AM
Hello John, how are you today? I hope you are doing well. My brother-in-law's nephew passed away at 44 years old. Your nephew passed at 33 years old. These are very young ages to lose their lives. They will always be us in spirit.Have a wonderful day John my friend.
Date: 11/24/2021 1:01:00 AM
A very sad event penned in verse. Please accept my condolences also.
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Date: 11/24/2021 10:56:00 AM
Hello Denis Spilchuk, yes it is very sad. His parents were shocked to hear this news. The wake went well. It will be a hard Christmas for them. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 11/21/2021 11:53:00 PM
How horrible. Sad. My great grandma sobbed when her 69 year old son died.
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Date: 11/23/2021 10:45:00 AM
Hello Caren, yes Caren it is sad when a son or daughter passes before the parent. It was a hard day for my sister's sister-in-law son passed. Christmas will be rough on the family. Hugs.
Date: 11/15/2021 8:51:00 AM
Experienced same shock when my best friend passed away at age of 48
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Date: 11/15/2021 10:33:00 AM
Hello Anisha, yes it is a shock when friends and love ones pass at age. My brother- in-law's sister is still having a hard time of it. I see by your comment, you went through the same thing. blessings my friend.
Date: 11/2/2021 4:25:00 PM
Sorry for your loss Darlene, prayers for you and the family. Age is seldom the cause of death. Thanks for sharing through your writing. Bill
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/3/2021 8:00:00 AM
Hello Bill Baker, Thank you. It was a shock to the whole family. You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 10/31/2021 6:38:00 AM
This is terrible, Darlene. I am so sad, and so sorry for your loss. My sincerest condolences to your family. What a devastating loss. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 10/31/2021 7:22:00 AM
Hello Mala, today is the wake. thank you for your thought. His parents are very upset. It will be a very rough day for them. Thank you Love,& Friendship Darlene.
Date: 10/28/2021 8:49:00 AM
This is so sad; how horrible. I am sorry for your loss. He was a baby.
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Date: 10/31/2021 7:23:00 AM
Helo Care3n, yes he was a baby. It is rough on the parents today is the wake. It will be a long day for the whole family. Hugs.
Date: 10/27/2021 4:26:00 PM
Dear Darlene, My sincerest condolences on the loss of your nephew. Your narrative clearly expresses the fact age does not matter. I lost a brother when he was 45, I know how this stings. Blessings , Paulette
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Date: 10/28/2021 6:11:00 AM
Hello Paulette, yes Paulette, you know how that feels. It is horrible. Hugs.
Date: 10/27/2021 4:20:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I'm so sorry for your loss, to lose someone that way is devastating. I'll keep you and your family in my prayers. ~ Debbie
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Date: 10/28/2021 6:10:00 AM
Hello Debra, Thank you Debra. The funeral is on Sunday. Hugs.
Date: 10/27/2021 3:34:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I'm sorry for your sister's and family's loss. No parent should have to bury their child. Life is unpredictable and filled with so many uncertainties. That's why we must not take life for granted and live it to the fullest. Once again I'm so sorry for your family lost-Alexis
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/28/2021 6:09:00 AM
Hello Alexis Y., right no parent should bury their child. The parents are still in shock. Yes we must take life to the fullest. Thank you Alexis. Hugs.
Date: 10/27/2021 10:43:00 AM
I hope you are ok Darlene. My thoughts are with you .
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/27/2021 10:54:00 AM
Hello Heidi, I am fine thank you. Thank you Heidi. Hugs.
Date: 10/27/2021 10:41:00 AM
Life is so uncertain.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/27/2021 10:57:00 AM
Hello Plabi, yes life is uncertain for sure. Age does not matter. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 10/27/2021 7:35:00 AM
Oh Darlene….that is so very sad. Life is so precious.Sending you a hug. Debx
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Date: 10/27/2021 10:59:00 AM
Hello Deb, yes it is very sad. Yes life is precious. Thank you for the hugs.Darlenex
Date: 10/26/2021 6:00:00 PM
You are so right, Darlene. the ultimate mystery, we never will know, because 'age does not matter'. Like how you have written this.
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Date: 10/27/2021 6:30:00 AM
Hello Harry, the parents are really upset. the wake is Sunday. It will be a long day. So sad. Enjoy yor day my frind.
Date: 10/26/2021 5:02:00 PM
Sad. True, every day is a miracle, and should be lived to the fullest. Very good advise. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 10/27/2021 6:35:00 AM
Hello Joe, Yes every day is a miracle and should be lived to the fullest. Thank you Joe. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 10/26/2021 9:19:00 AM
What a terrible find how heart breaking to find your son dead and at such an age -it is said however, that men in their 40's are more at rsk for heart attacks, hugs and blessings, Jennifer,
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Date: 10/26/2021 10:47:00 AM
Hello Jennifer, Yes it is said that men in their 40's are at risk for heart attacks in men. It could have been a heart attack or something else. I am not sure what it was. Hugs.
Date: 10/26/2021 12:45:00 AM
I've said it before and I'll say it again, No one should ever have to bury a child no matter how old that child is, it's still your baby. So sorry for your and your sister's loss. God Bless my friend. JB
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/26/2021 5:14:00 AM
Hello Judy, yes no parent should bury their child no matter their age. It is so sad. the whole family is in shock. thank you. God Bless.
Date: 10/25/2021 3:43:00 PM
aww this is so sad on so many levels Darlene, so sorry for the loss for your sister ad family, so tragic when we outlive our children:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/26/2021 5:16:00 AM
Helo Jan,Yes it is sad when the parents out live their child. This is tragic for the whole family. Hugs xx Darlene
Date: 10/25/2021 3:16:00 PM
I agree when your time is up it doesn't matter how old you are, how sad, thanks for sharing this
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/26/2021 5:17:00 AM
Hello Mysitc Rose, Rose, Yes that is right it does not matter how old you are. It is tragic to the whole family. Hugs.
Date: 10/25/2021 3:11:00 PM
Yes, as we get older, age doesn’t make sense. Hey, when we were young…they were old, but then at this age it just doesn’t make sense… Then I remember back to when my uncle died at 25…way too young!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/26/2021 5:21:00 AM
Hello Kim, my godfather died when i was a baby. i never met him. My brother-in-law's sister's son death is a shock to the whole family. Age does not matter and we never know when we will go eiher. Hugs.
Date: 10/25/2021 2:17:00 PM
Darlene, great writing, sadly younger people are dying this days while the old live on ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2021 2:51:00 PM
Hello Constance, yes it is so sad. Yes the younger people are dying while the older ones live on. Love & Serenity Darlene.
Date: 10/25/2021 9:58:00 AM
Age is a topic that bears contemplation on many levels, your piece clearly portrays one of them!! Important thoughts Darlene xxoo
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Date: 10/25/2021 10:07:00 AM
Hello Mike Gentile, Yes Mike important thoughts. Mike xx00
Date: 10/25/2021 7:28:00 AM
So sad, but it happens... Pangie
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2021 10:10:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes it is sad brother-in-law's sister and her family. It was a great shock to them all, as well as my brother-in-law. it was his nephew. We are all in shock. Hugs.
Date: 10/25/2021 2:30:00 AM
Must be truly dreadful when something like this happens. A serious poem with a profound message...Delice
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2021 5:46:00 AM
Hello Delice, yes it is serious. The whole family is in shock. Her son was only 44 years old. the whole family is upset. It is a shock to handle. Blessings my friend.
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