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Age Comes To All

It comes to us all this thing called age insidiously creeping up over the decades surprisingly catching us unaware we all know it is coming, its just when? When do we realise our joints are stiff and that we have grown so tediously slow? looking back it seems like yesterday when I was in full bloom of sweet youth It is not the aches that I find hardest it is the infernal time it takes to complete the simplest task hours doing what was done in a hour or so Yes with age comes wisdom, sure, fine I prefer flexibility instead of seizure. Yet for us poets the greatest fear of all is what if we lose our minds? Our Soul? Would we know but be locked behind bars? able to understand all that is happening but be unable to articulate our thoughts? if so the doctor saying "est La Morte" Would for me be the greatest release how could I live in a world locked away unable to comprehend the written word that so inspires and stimulates my mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/8/2014 7:03:00 PM
Yes you're right Linda, things do take longer to do, specially getting out of bed in the morning lol. Can't see you losing your mind anytime soon, writes like this show the soul very much alive and kicking. Take care, Richard
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Date: 2/10/2014 3:02:00 PM
lol yes getting up when stiff after a restless night can be the pits ty hugs
Date: 2/8/2014 8:40:00 AM
Last two lines are very nice. The change comes with time in our age physically and mentally, beautifully worded. Acute feeling it's. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/10/2014 3:00:00 PM
ty Bl nice to see you hugs
Date: 2/8/2014 8:31:00 AM
so true linda beautifully penned dear friend
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/10/2014 3:00:00 PM
ty Liam hugs
Date: 2/7/2014 12:20:00 PM
- Unfortunately, it is true Shadow. . . struggle your whole life .... grow old and become helpless (and toothless :) - Have a great "love" weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/8/2014 10:13:00 AM
oh don't lol not toothless ty Anna Lise hugs
Date: 2/7/2014 11:11:00 AM
written with deep reflection and graceful voice that bring this work to sheer wisdom.. just wonderful, shadow.. huggs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/8/2014 10:12:00 AM
ty Nette hugs
Date: 2/7/2014 8:28:00 AM
We never know what life will issue out to us..If one knows their parents, grandparents and possibly the great grandparents then it is possible that one can see the future through them..Enjoyed reading your take on growing old..The saying goes " Growing old is not for sissies"..Your great words of encouragement left me inspired ..Thanks for your visit..Sara
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Date: 2/8/2014 10:12:00 AM
very true Sara ty hugs

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