Age Comes To All

It comes to us all this thing called age
insidiously creeping up over the decades
surprisingly catching us unaware 
we all know it is coming,  its just when?

When do we realise our joints are stiff
and that we have grown so tediously slow?
looking back it seems like yesterday
when I was in full bloom of sweet youth

It is not the aches that I find hardest
it is the infernal time it takes
to complete the simplest task
hours doing what was done in a hour or so

Yes with age comes wisdom, sure, fine
I prefer flexibility instead of seizure.
Yet for us poets the greatest fear of all
is what if we lose our minds? Our Soul?

Would we know but be locked behind bars?
able to understand all that is happening
but be unable to articulate our thoughts?
if so the doctor saying "est La Morte"

Would for me be the greatest release
how could I live in a world locked away
unable to comprehend the written word
that so inspires and stimulates my mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 8, 2014 at 7:03 PM
Yes you're right Linda, things do take longer to do, specially getting out of bed in the morning lol. Can't see you losing your mind anytime soon, writes like this show the soul very much alive and kicking. Take care, Richard
Hamilton Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 3:02 PM
lol yes getting up when stiff after a restless night can be the pits ty hugs
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February 8, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Last two lines are very nice. The change comes with time in our age physically and mentally, beautifully worded. Acute feeling it's. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
Hamilton Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 3:00 PM
ty Bl nice to see you hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 8:31 AM
so true linda beautifully penned dear friend
Hamilton Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 3:00 PM
ty Liam hugs
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 12:20 PM
- Unfortunately, it is true Shadow. . . struggle your whole life .... grow old and become helpless (and toothless :) - Have a great "love" weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 10:13 AM
oh don't lol not toothless ty Anna Lise hugs
Onclaud Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 11:11 AM
written with deep reflection and graceful voice that bring this work to sheer wisdom.. just wonderful, shadow.. huggs
Hamilton Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 10:12 AM
ty Nette hugs
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February 7, 2014 at 8:28 AM
We never know what life will issue out to us..If one knows their parents, grandparents and possibly the great grandparents then it is possible that one can see the future through them..Enjoyed reading your take on growing old..The saying goes " Growing old is not for sissies"..Your great words of encouragement left me inspired ..Thanks for your visit..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 10:12 AM
very true Sara ty hugs
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