Age

When one reaches a certain age
it is difficult to move far from
death – I mean, to counter, such
negativity, I make it a point
to see every sunrise as my best – 
making, luscious, painted vases 
out of cloud-forms; filling them 
to overflowing with fancy roses 
despite the obvious chill in the air 
and my double knit sweater. 

I guess, what I’m trying to
to say is, while still having 
my senses, and somewhat pain
free, I will dream youthfully – 
and who is really, definitively
to say, where one
life ends 
and another 
                              begins….

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Date: 10/3/2020 1:23:00 PM
Many will relate and I think the philosophy of dreaming youthfully is the most important thing...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/4/2020 4:55:00 AM
Hi Si: thank you. You got the most important point of the poem: "To Dream Youthfully!" As Poe said, "Is all we see and seem, but a dream within a dream?"
Date: 9/30/2020 4:33:00 PM
What will we think when we can't do everything. We can hope family will be by and hopefully not toss us in nursing homes. Life changes but if one is a believer, one knows God has you in His hands. He lives in spite of disabilities.. Pangie xx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/3/2020 6:02:00 AM
Thank you for commenting, Pangie; for sure, easy or easier to be positive when one is not suffering constantly with extreme pain -- but God does have us in his hands...he did not create old age, suffering and death -- it is our own doing. Free Will is almost entirely misunderstood by all faiths. One cannot have it, if anything is done for us. And I believe we are entirely free.
Date: 9/26/2020 4:10:00 PM
Hello Joe DiMino, I feel that age is just a number. someone told me if you do not like your number turn it around, Death comes at any age not just the elderly. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2020 12:24:00 PM
Hello Joe DiMino, Same with me Joe, Life is a miracle. Yes it is. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/26/2020 5:38:00 PM
Got to admit, so far I can still do most everything I want to...just a little more slowly, and carefully. Life is a miracle all the way! Love it! Have a great evening, Darlene. Blessings!
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