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Against the Moon - Sexyku For Contest

through bathroom windows moon reveals two silhouettes entering water A sexy sensual sexyku for Richard's Contest. 2/20/2017

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Maria Williams

Date: 3/14/2017 10:24:00 PM

You've created such a lovely picture in this scene Charmaine.

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/8/2017 2:52:00 PM

This made me chuckle!! :) well done Charmaine!! Oh and congratulations too!! Big Hugggs and love. deb

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/3/2017 3:20:00 PM

Love the haiku :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2017 11:23:00 PM

Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/23/2017 9:53:00 PM

Hi Charma, You are good at these kinds of writes and you do them well. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2017 5:53:00 PM

VEry nice one, Charma. Glad I took a look at this winner list to see your awesome KU!! Congrats to you

Paul Callus

Date: 2/23/2017 9:51:00 AM

An excellent haiku comprising suggestive imagery, Charm. Congratulations on your lovely win. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/23/2017 9:08:00 AM

This is hot Charmaine, I was glad to see your name on the list.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/23/2017 11:55:00 AM

Thanks Rick..I have a soft spot for Haiku..So I was tempted to enter.Thanks dear friend.

Tobey Hill

Date: 2/22/2017 2:34:00 PM

Rub a dub dub, slipping in the tub...TAH

Peter Dome

Date: 2/22/2017 8:53:00 AM

great visua well done, Hope you win. Pete.

Darren White

Date: 2/21/2017 10:24:00 PM

Lovely! And suggestive too :) Good luck in the contest.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/21/2017 12:07:00 PM

Boy, you really know how to get a fella's temp to rise, among other things. Great short sexyku, Charmaine. The contest name roped me in to read this one. Glad I did. Put a pep in my step today. Appreciate that. Love always, dear.

Chris Green

Date: 2/21/2017 6:26:00 AM

Softly sensual and definitely deserving of a deep “sigh” Charmaine. Good luck in the contest

John Lawless

Date: 2/20/2017 7:48:00 PM

it is always difficult to be the one on the outside looking in.....especially if you get caught.....very intriguing entry Charmaine.

James Inman

Date: 2/20/2017 5:55:00 PM

Very sexy indeed. Beautiful imagery.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/20/2017 5:37:00 PM

Very romantic, Charmaine:)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/20/2017 5:01:00 PM

The format is in true form. Imagery is there. Best of luck with the contest.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/20/2017 3:48:00 PM

Very nice! Great imagination. I have figured nothing out! I enjoyed your contest entry and wish you luck in all things ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 2/20/2017 3:19:00 PM

oooh err Charma very sensual ... they should get a blind lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/20/2017 3:28:00 PM

Ha..First I was going to do a haiku about Moonlight filtering through blinds lol Light filters through blinds/revealing two silhouettes/ On bed become one...This was my last..before the one I posted..Was thinking of Hot Springs too and Oceanic Waters..and against rising moon...but at a point the bedroom blinds were there too ..Bt I have a poem with moon filtering through bedroom blinds..So guess it had to be Hot tub time ..lol :)

Tim Smith

Date: 2/20/2017 2:56:00 PM

Hope there are plenty of bubbles : ) captcha is SHY...lol

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/20/2017 3:30:00 PM

To be honest I was a bit Shy to post this..Hope it would be worth the blushing effort :)