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Against All Odds

I took the high road home, though it wasn't easy neglected, abandoned, and used, I felt I deserved better so I moved away from that dirty apartment full of rats and dirty men, and cleaned up my act by working in a respectable Motel as a maid I did the same kind of work but at least I got paid and I didn't go home with a black eye and bruised shins Tired of making up excuses for myself, I had to do something so when I saw him enter the motel with Barbie girl, smelling of wine and awful spritz, all I could do was tuck my head in and walk ; "Maggie, you look like you just saw a ghost " my co-worker said I gave her the do not disturb sign, " place this on that door please, they don't want to be disturbed" Then I walked to the front desk and dialed the police, I told them where they could find him. Then I went back to that dirty rat infested apartment and cleaned all night, until the dawn bathed me with morning light. I was going to be alright, at least for a fortnight. October 24, 2021 Sponsor: Regina McIntosh Contest Name: The High Road
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Date: 11/1/2021 8:35:00 PM
Wow how strong you are to persevere despite all that! Kudos. Congrats on a win
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Date: 10/27/2021 12:03:00 AM
Interesting mess-cleansing. Courageous act and great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/26/2021 3:58:00 PM
Wonderful writing and Congrats on your placement. God bless you always, my kind friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 10/25/2021 4:28:00 PM
This is a brave story, and very compelling, your ending lines are wonderful! Best wishes for the contest~
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Date: 10/25/2021 12:17:00 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, yes that took courage. that person is stronger than she thinks she is. Enjoy your day my friend. blessings.
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Date: 10/25/2021 1:04:00 AM
It take courage to clean up after the rat. Hope you opened all windows. Hugs.
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Date: 10/24/2021 4:37:00 PM
Sure kept my interest. It is so sad when life deals you lemons. good luck.
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:45:00 PM
It's so hard to break the cycle of abuse and move on, a powerfully penned piece Vie, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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