John Lawless Poet Free verse

Aft-Play Nighttime Musing

AFT-PLAY  - Nighttime Musing


Listening -
soft murmur of her breath
gently moving silken strands
draped across her face,

Nuzzling -
beauty’s aromatic aftermath

adrift -
on a sea of dreams.



12/6/2015

submitted to – Nighttime Musings – Poetry Contest
sponsor – FJ Thomas

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James Inman January 3, 2016 at 9:23 AM Great write John.

Skat A December 29, 2015 at 6:04 PM JOHN, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2015 at 5:26 PM Cool title and VERY cool poem. Congrats, John.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 29, 2015 at 1:19 AM Loved ur unique take on theme... perfectly done.. congrats on fine win John! John Lawless December 29, 2015 at 9:26 AM Thank you Dr. Sharma for you support

Suzanne Delaney December 28, 2015 at 8:54 PM Love the drifting intimacy of this. Congratulations on your win. SuZ John Lawless December 29, 2015 at 9:26 AM Thank you Suzanne for taking the time to read and comment.

Susan Gentry December 28, 2015 at 8:08 PM Congratulations on win with this beautiful poem. John Lawless December 29, 2015 at 9:25 AM Thank you Susan

Viv Wigley December 28, 2015 at 7:28 PM Lovely piece, John, well done. And all the best for 2016, Viv John Lawless December 29, 2015 at 9:25 AM Thanks Viv....if the "fairies" don't bag ya....sneak up on the coming year.

Frederic Parker December 28, 2015 at 3:32 PM congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem John Lawless December 28, 2015 at 3:39 PM Thank you Frederic.

Paul Callus December 28, 2015 at 2:47 PM Musing ... in three beautiful steps, John! ~ Congratulations on a lovely and worthy win. ~ All the best. // paul John Lawless December 28, 2015 at 3:38 PM Thanks Paul, always good to hear from you

Robert Stoner Jr December 28, 2015 at 2:06 PM Congratulations John on your win. I enjoyed the form and imagery. John Lawless December 28, 2015 at 3:37 PM Thanks Robert,

Beautiful Scars December 28, 2015 at 1:02 PM John, congrats on your win :) Well deserved John! * smiles* John Lawless December 28, 2015 at 3:36 PM Thanks Laura

CayCay Godwin December 7, 2015 at 12:38 AM Very lovely and loving - and touching. I admit I do not know what AFT means!?? John Lawless December 7, 2015 at 8:52 PM ....it would be the other side of "foreplay"(a stretch of the nautical terms "fore and aft")

Skat A December 7, 2015 at 12:07 AM lovely write. SKAT

Jan Allison December 6, 2015 at 9:14 AM very beautiful and sensual John:-) hugs Jan xx John Lawless December 6, 2015 at 9:33 AM Thanks Jan,