Afternoon Tea

Strains of chamber music fill the air
                  Invited guests have come to share,

                  Cozied pots filled with steeping teas
                  For the Kitties, Collie, Bear and me.

                  A table filled with a sumptuous fare,
                  Cakes, scones with cream, and a torte with pears

                  Served on plates edged in filigree
                  A perfect afternoon, a jubilee.


For Eve Ropers Contest: Rhyming Me a Poem Poetry Contest
11/12/21
Photo#4
Placed 1st in contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Ahh! Paulette you have created such a wonderful, and sumptuous, scene! Made my mouth water especially the pear torte. So creative. Such a delight. Congratulations on your win! Blessings. Happy Thanksgiving.
Calasibetta Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Hi Sam, glad you enjoyed it....it was a fun write~reflecting on the lovely Teas that I have had shared with friends. Happy Thanksgiving! Paulette
Allison Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 3:46 PM
What a sweet poem Paulette, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Calasibetta Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 9:24 AM
Thank you Jan. Blessings, Paulette
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Mmm…yummy and on such pretty plates!
Calasibetta Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Does sound good, doesn't it? I just purchased a new tea set and look forward to making my poem a reality. Blessings, Paulette
Ball Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:30 AM
Lovely and sweet Paulette. A beautiful rhyme fit for a Children's Book. Reminds me of my tea parties when I was a girl. God Bless, JB
Calasibetta Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Hi Judy, glad you enjoyed my Afternoon Tea; yes, very reminiscent of childhood. Blessings, Paulette
Buhagiar Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 3:37 AM
And it must have been a lovely afternoon too. And I congratulate for your win. You did better than me.
Calasibetta Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Hi Victor, thanks for stopping by to comment on Afternoon Tea. It was a lot of fun to write. And, by the way, I may have done well but you pen some very outstanding poems. Blessings, Paulette
Buehler Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:22 PM
Sounds perfectly delightful, Paulette. I'm sure the tea party will prove popular, and that it'll be a hit in the contest as well. :)
Calasibetta Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Thank you Evelyn, I appreciate you stopping by to comment. Blessings, Paulette
Goff Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:10 PM
Beautiful lyric on such a lovely tradition, Paulette, also, I sent you soupmail...
Calasibetta Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Hi James, Thank you for commenting on Afternoon Tea, it was fun to compose. Yes, I received your soupmail message...grief never leaves us, it changes through time. Blessings, Paulette
Brown Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 5:01 PM
Paulette, What a charming poem. You painted a beautifully picture. Good Luck in the Contest. Blessings ~ Debra
Calasibetta Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 5:21 PM
Hi Debra, Thanks for stopping by....this was a fun write! Blessings, Paulette
Baker Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Lovely rhyming Paulette, Sounds like someone is enjoying a second childhood to me, or a fine memory. Enjoy your day. A poet friend, Bill
Calasibetta Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 4:31 PM
Hi Bill, Thanks for stopping by....glad you enjoyed Afternoon Tea...yes a fine memory indeed. Blessings, Paulette
Sangster - K Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 9:26 PM
Hi Paulette. I enjoyed reading your afternoon tea. The imagery took me there. I'm actually craving a scone with cream now. Sadly, I'll have to settle for a chocolate digestive with a cup of earl grey. Cheers Anne :-)
Calasibetta Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 6:56 AM
LOL...Glad you enjoyed Afternoon Tea....wish I could have actually offered you a scone with cream in 'real time'~I would have loved one too! Enjoy your Earl Grey in the meantime. Blessings, Paulette
DiMino Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 4:36 AM
Delightful! Reminds me so much of a Child's tea party, with her dearest friends present, before the corruption of growing up. Love it!
Calasibetta Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Thanks Joe, I had a lot of fun composing it....like you said,"before the corruption of growing up"; so true! Hope all is well with you, Blessings, Paulette
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 2:04 PM
so sweet. I love seeing those who also liked this picture the best. Congrats!
Calasibetta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Thanks Andrea, it was fun to fantasize and compose. Blessings, Paulette
Hutchings Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 6:26 PM
Congratulations! This sounds like the most enticing invitation to a tea party anyone could write!! Send this out, and every guest will RSVP "YES"! Great use of sensory words! -Meghan
Calasibetta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Hi Meghan, So glad you enjoyed it...I too thought the visual made for a lovely afternoon; an afternoon I wish I could share with all our Soupers. Blessings, Paulette
Goldsmith Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Afternoon Tea" is a wonderful story/write. Can I come next time??? hahahah Enjoy your win with blessings....................
Calasibetta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:05 AM
Most certainly you are invited....only wish I could host an afternoon like this. Blessings, Paulette
Horne Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 6:44 AM
sounds wonderful!
Calasibetta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Thank you Jack. Was fun to write! Blessings, Paulette
Skelly Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 2:31 AM
Paulette, afternoon tea sounds so very nice. Scones with cream just perfect...Delice I had fun with this challenge also.
Calasibetta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Wish you could join us! Yes, it was a fun challenge, indeed. Blessings, Paulette
Watt Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Paulette, the chamber music, filigree, and sumptuous fare sound like a perfect afternoon to spend with those whom you love the most. Thank you for painting this word picture of a delightful jubilee, simply charming. Blessings ~ John
Calasibetta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Glad you enjoyed it John~I love the pomp of an authentic Tea. As I wrote the poem, I reflected on the elegant teas, I have had the opportunity to share in. Blessings, Paulette
Poet Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 3:22 PM
Paulette, you crafted a lovely piece that brings forth the delights of afternoon tea, with good rhyme and flow. It was a beautiful get-together.
Calasibetta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Lasaad, yes it seems it was a lovely afternoon indeed. Thank you for your comments and glad you enjoyed it. Sorry it was only words and not reality. Blessings, Paulette
Mcconnell Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Lovely piece Paulette bringing out the delight of afternoon tea, nice rhyme and flow too. I did one on the same subject some time ago, you'll find it on my list. Blessings always, Gordon
Calasibetta Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Hi Gordon, Thank you for your kind comments. I will check out your poem! Blessings, Paulette
Daniel Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:53 AM
So cute, Paulette:) I see that this is the most chosen picture, you have brought it to life:)
Calasibetta Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Hi Jo, glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write, imagining myself, hosting an afternoon of proper tea. Blessings, Paulette
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:17 AM
A delightful get together, Paulette. Much enjoyed how you brought alive the contest photo. All the best.
Calasibetta Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Hi Vijay, I wish you could join us....glad I was able to bring the photo to life... Blessings, Paulette
Faulkner Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 8:01 PM
Sounds delicious! Can my teddy bear and I come :)
Calasibetta Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Would be delighted to have you! Thanks for stopping by to comment..... Blessings, Paulette
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