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Afternoon Poem

...afternoon breeze whistling eyes closed, closely listening leaves low breathing, heaving forest edge darkening ancient haze, mist creeping thousands of years float by ever-seeing mind's eye virginal sea, verdant earth deepest sky, heaven's worth tales of leaving, poems of birth...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/24/2008 4:36:00 AM
Romeo - truly amazing and very relaxing poem - I loved the layout and the flow - great job - God bless
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Date: 8/22/2008 11:16:00 AM
Romeo I love this write WOW WOW this is a favorite and then you topped it off with a great form here EXCELLENT WRITE!!! Laura :)
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