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Aftermath

For those of you who aren't from the UK, and may not be aware, it was Guy Fawkes night a couple of weeks ago. It gave me the idea for this ... A pile of ashes on the ground Muddy footprints all around A smoking ember here and there The reek of burning everywhere Bits of paper strewn about A banger with its fuse gone out Rocket launchers, an empty pack Grass, in patches, scorched and black Sparklers with their twisted wire lie abandoned round the fire A rocket stick from who knows where had missed the greenhouse by a hair A fence despoiled by a smokey swirl where once a flaming wheel did whirl The nail remains, but not much more Just a burned and twisted core A lump of blackened silver foil lies forlornly on the soil A baked potato lies within Cremated in a shroud of tin All across the UK nation stand tiny scenes of devastation Like battles fought by gnomes and elves Not just a fun night for ourselves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/27/2014 10:12:00 AM
At the bottom you might mention what Guy Fawkes Day is. But loved the visuals.
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:54:00 PM
wow sounds like my back yard on the 5th of July,lol. Well written ,I enjoyed the poem and the imagery you offered,thanks much
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Date: 11/26/2014 3:53:00 PM
The firework parties went on for about a week here - just tons of money going up in smoke - loved the imagery of the cremated potato - reminded me of when we were kids and we would meet the neighbors for firework parties - toffee apples and baked potatoes - mmm those memories:-) hugs jan xxx
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Rob Biden
Date: 11/26/2014 4:10:00 PM
Thank you for your comments both. That penultimate verse was a bit of an afterthought. There's always one spud that gets missed though.

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