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Aftermath

For those of you who aren't from the UK, and may not be aware, it was Guy Fawkes night a couple of weeks ago. It gave me the idea for this ...

A pile of ashes on the ground
Muddy footprints all around
A smoking ember here and there
The reek of burning everywhere

Bits of paper strewn about
A banger with its fuse gone out
Rocket launchers, an empty pack
Grass, in patches, scorched and black

Sparklers with their twisted wire
lie abandoned round the fire
A rocket stick from who knows where
had missed the greenhouse by a hair

A fence despoiled by a smokey swirl
where once a flaming wheel did whirl
The nail remains, but not much more
Just a burned and twisted core

A lump of blackened silver foil
lies forlornly on the soil
A baked potato lies within
Cremated in a shroud of tin

All across the UK nation
stand tiny scenes of devastation
Like battles fought by gnomes and elves
Not just a fun night for ourselves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/27/2014 10:12:00 AM
At the bottom you might mention what Guy Fawkes Day is. But loved the visuals.
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:54:00 PM
wow sounds like my back yard on the 5th of July,lol. Well written ,I enjoyed the poem and the imagery you offered,thanks much
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Date: 11/26/2014 3:53:00 PM
The firework parties went on for about a week here - just tons of money going up in smoke - loved the imagery of the cremated potato - reminded me of when we were kids and we would meet the neighbors for firework parties - toffee apples and baked potatoes - mmm those memories:-) hugs jan xxx
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Rob Biden
Date: 11/26/2014 4:10:00 PM
Thank you for your comments both. That penultimate verse was a bit of an afterthought. There's always one spud that gets missed though.

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