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Afterglow

The bishop
sent him on his way
with one more blessing
that he may
be filled with fullness
by a deity
he could not see;
poor fumbling soul,
lost in the dark
and petulant, he whined,
when down the path
with flashing spirit in his mind
there came a lesser god,
indeed the very one that he
had just  squeezed down to size--
 
and then
thus blinded,  passed it by.
                 ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/14/2012 5:31:00 PM
Robert,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great day inspired by "YOU!" wishing you the best holidays 2 come ;-) always ~PD
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Robert Ludden
Date: 12/14/2012 8:49:00 PM
Thanks! I wish a better poem had been chosen, but the attention is nice.
Date: 12/12/2012 10:46:00 AM
I "selected" a ditty, thrown together, I am afraid.
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Date: 12/12/2012 9:35:00 AM
Pity the loss, eh? Congrats on the selection. daver
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Robert Ludden
Date: 12/12/2012 10:48:00 AM
see above
Date: 8/5/2012 3:55:00 PM
That's not the afterglow I was expecting from you....
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/5/2012 4:27:00 PM
Keep reading 'em. You may find what you are looking for. :-)
Date: 7/14/2012 7:32:00 PM
hmmmm [as to content ;)] Have you ever wondered why folks say there is only 1 God when Yaweh in the the Old Testament said Thou shall have no other God before me? Wouldn't that be God admitting there was more than 1 God? Light & Love
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/16/2012 8:28:00 AM
Except I recall that my priests used to remind me that "God" was probably referring to material things that we were giving our loyalty instead of "him"
Date: 7/6/2012 4:31:00 PM
‡ Well, Some Things I Am Certain Are Forever Carved In Stone * Also, I Really Enjoyed Your Lovely Visit * As For Myself Being A Poet & Knowing This Or That ? No, Nor Is It My Own Desire To Be So * Yet, I Do Somewhat Admire Gifted Writers & Most Definitely Beauty When I Find Its Splendours * Thus I Shall Look Much Forward Unto Your Gifted Quill's Offering Shall They Arrive * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/16/2012 8:33:00 AM
gifted? Oh, come on!
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/16/2012 8:29:00 AM
you are making my head too large.
Date: 7/5/2012 5:32:00 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/16/2012 8:30:00 AM
Thank you

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