Afterglow

The bishop
sent him on his way
with one more blessing
that he may
be filled with fullness
by a deity
he could not see;
poor fumbling soul,
lost in the dark
and petulant, he whined,
when down the path
with flashing spirit in his mind
there came a lesser god,
indeed the very one that he
had just  squeezed down to size--
 
and then
thus blinded,  passed it by.
                 ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 14, 2012 at 5:31 PM
Robert,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great day inspired by "YOU!" wishing you the best holidays 2 come ;-) always ~PD
Ludden Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 8:49 PM
Thanks! I wish a better poem had been chosen, but the attention is nice.
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December 12, 2012 at 10:46 AM
I "selected" a ditty, thrown together, I am afraid.
Austin Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 9:35 AM
Pity the loss, eh? Congrats on the selection. daver
Ludden Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 10:48 AM
see above
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August 5, 2012 at 3:55 PM
That's not the afterglow I was expecting from you....
Ludden Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Keep reading 'em. You may find what you are looking for. :-)
Guzzi Avatar
July 14, 2012 at 7:32 PM
hmmmm [as to content ;)] Have you ever wondered why folks say there is only 1 God when Yaweh in the the Old Testament said Thou shall have no other God before me? Wouldn't that be God admitting there was more than 1 God? Light & Love
Ludden Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 8:28 AM
Except I recall that my priests used to remind me that "God" was probably referring to material things that we were giving our loyalty instead of "him"
St.Cross Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 4:31 PM
‡ Well, Some Things I Am Certain Are Forever Carved In Stone * Also, I Really Enjoyed Your Lovely Visit * As For Myself Being A Poet & Knowing This Or That ? No, Nor Is It My Own Desire To Be So * Yet, I Do Somewhat Admire Gifted Writers & Most Definitely Beauty When I Find Its Splendours * Thus I Shall Look Much Forward Unto Your Gifted Quill's Offering Shall They Arrive * My Luv, Rachel ‡
Ludden Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 8:33 AM
gifted? Oh, come on!
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July 16, 2012 at 8:29 AM
you are making my head too large.
Kendrick Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 5:32 PM
Interesting work..Sara
Ludden Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 8:30 AM
Thank you
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