Afterglow

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Afterglow Poetry Contest
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When the existential magic disappears
And life holds nothing more than
my terrestrial tears and frivolous fears
When feeding my mind is no longer empirical 
Or essential, as human hunger suffices, 
when I no longer thirst, and eminence gives no rise,
and sullen shibumi canopies worn and torn
shade not the arid and hot desert, once the lofty
snow summits forthwith cloaked in thawing toxins
Or the ruby rose that does not scent me, reminiscently                                              
as its thorns prick crimson numbness
Tasteless is the blood from this warrior’s sword
And Lords with rattles of snakes poison less
Horns no longer adorn me, my ashes freed
I’ve heard of a hall of the slain,
where dead heroes reign
When our world gives way to the next
Where golden shields a palatial fortress
Take one more fallen warrioress,
to other realms, plush, pristine, called
Valhalla, an afterglow

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Date: 4/8/2025 6:16:00 PM
Anaya, sounds a bit like a bitter end for this poor soul. I suppose when life seems like this, then perhaps it is time to give up the endeavor....or get some help and antidepressants! I'm not there yet, but it's an interesting description of something to be wary about. Smiles!!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/8/2025 6:20:00 PM
This is a warrioress who is ready to lay her sword down, boredom perhaps of mankind who never learn. tisk, tisk and sigh! Thanks for dropping by~
Date: 4/8/2025 4:12:00 AM
waw, this is very beautiful, with great images and aliterations, i loved the final message and thougths delivered, merci poétesse
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/8/2025 5:03:00 AM
Merci mon pote, poét! :):)
Date: 4/6/2025 10:33:00 AM
Nice poem on a new prespective n afterglow.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/6/2025 1:26:00 PM
TY, JAY! Have a nice day
Date: 4/6/2025 1:41:00 AM
love the mythological feel of your renaissance afterglow, anaya, when warfare has ended somehow and glory of abundance bloomed ' where dead heroes reign'... fascinating!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/6/2025 8:38:00 AM
My perspective of an afterglow, a warrioress's much awaited heavenly resting palace with gardens! Ty Nette
Date: 4/5/2025 3:28:00 PM
The Klingons call it Stovokor. Same. Odin lovers will approve. A young Robert Plant as well, though he seems to have moved on
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/5/2025 3:40:00 PM
"The Immigrant Song" ha, We come from the land of the ice and snow From the midnight sun where the hot springs flow The hammer of the gods Will drive our ships to new lands To fight the horde, sing and cry Valhalla, I am coming......
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