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Afterglow

When the existential magic disappears
And life holds nothing more than
my terrestrial tears and frivolous fears
When feeding my mind is no longer empirical 
Or essential, as human hunger suffices, 
when I no longer thirst, and eminence gives no rise,
and sullen shibumi canopies worn and torn
shade not the arid and hot desert, once the lofty
snow summits forthwith cloaked in thawing toxins
Or the ruby rose that does not scent me, reminiscently                                              
as its thorns prick crimson numbness
Tasteless is the blood from this warrior’s sword
And Lords with rattles of snakes poison less
Horns no longer adorn me, my ashes freed
I’ve heard of a hall of the slain,
where dead heroes reign
When our world gives way to the next
Where golden shields a palatial fortress
Take one more fallen warrioress,
to other realms, plush, pristine, called
Valhalla, an afterglow
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Beaufort Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 6:16 PM
Anaya, sounds a bit like a bitter end for this poor soul. I suppose when life seems like this, then perhaps it is time to give up the endeavor....or get some help and antidepressants! I'm not there yet, but it's an interesting description of something to be wary about. Smiles!!
Anaya Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 6:20 PM
This is a warrioress who is ready to lay her sword down, boredom perhaps of mankind who never learn. tisk, tisk and sigh! Thanks for dropping by~
Rolland Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 4:12 AM
waw, this is very beautiful, with great images and aliterations, i loved the final message and thougths delivered, merci poétesse
Anaya Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 5:03 AM
Merci mon pote, poét! :):)
Narain Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:33 AM
Nice poem on a new prespective n afterglow.
Anaya Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 1:26 PM
TY, JAY! Have a nice day
Onclaud Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 1:41 AM
love the mythological feel of your renaissance afterglow, anaya, when warfare has ended somehow and glory of abundance bloomed ' where dead heroes reign'... fascinating!
Anaya Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 8:38 AM
My perspective of an afterglow, a warrioress's much awaited heavenly resting palace with gardens! Ty Nette
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